Nice! I was looking forward to this hollow vs hollow fight, esp. the types of move that Erza's hollow could bring out (with Erza's unique sword magic) just like Ichigo's did.

Just so you know, my earlier review was sincere - really, thank you, for this wonderful fanfic.

Whoa . . . so I've been waiting months for an update, and then I get this AWESOME chapter? THanks a lot!

Updated and a badass chapter? Loved it and good luck on the next

I will never again read your AN again

keep up the good work!

Wow, interesting story! This was a fun story to read and I hope you continue with it. Also, your grammar is very good. Plus, the plot is very neat and not rushed. Thank you for the story and bye! -Amaya

Lovely. Epically.

Glad to see you're starting up again. I don't know how much help I would be with plot and content, but I can beta-read for grammar, etc. if you want.

Wouldn't Ichigo have noticed Erza's eyes turning yellow if her Hollow had taken over her body? I understand you wanted to let the plot develop, but you could have let Ichigo notice it and had Erza say something along the lines of "So what, don't you still want this?" and then his own Hollow takes over and they continue anyway. Also, Ichigo said Zeref used the Hollowfication spell on him, so who used it on Erza?

This was great! I can't wait for what happens next! I think that Ichigo makes Byakuya's Shikai look even more badass! This is getting good!

Damn dude! Finally an update! Its a pleasure know that you are alive! XD just kidding.

Nice update!

The ending... makes me feel a bit iffy on future chapters.
But maybe I'm wrong lol.

I hope to see more HollowErza soon

*Claps*
You had me there for a second...DAMN YOU!
Awesome chapter as always...Hope ya update soon

I have to say... this is amazing!
I thought it'd be like blah blah, fight fight- but its so much more than that!
It's hard to see Erza's inner desires and its awesome to show it!
Ichigo... you're either in denial or you're just utterly clueless :/