|Reviews for Fathers Day|
| Xireana Prime chapter 1 . 2/20
GAH (suficated by the amount of fluff this story produced!) love the story i lok forward mto your others!
| FluffyGirl217 chapter 1 . 11/23/2014
So much fluff 3 :DDDDDDDDDDd
| Little-Miss-Sass chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
I really liked it it is a really good one shot
| LunarStar98 chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
: D I LOVE IT! make more like it so sweet.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
way past my friend way past
| MusicalPrime chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Awwww so cute! :)
| meguhanu chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
i have to say this fic touched me deeply
i too have grown up without a father and i never celebrated Father's Day. I'm glad Jack and Oppy got a one on one moment
it almost brought tears to my eyes
| nightfury97 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
dude that was beautiful your so good at writing moments :) and happy birthday sorry its so late i feel really bad :( but i hope you got lots of goodies :)
| TerraPrime chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
I don't mean to be rude but is your shift key broken? All the names are capitilized but your I's aren't. Its very distracting. Good story though.
| Blackdawn21 chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
I cried...(which I hardly ever do!) I can relate to Jack so much...I loved it!
| Kaleia chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
That warms my heart! Jacks dad is a jerk leaving him and his mother. And he saw him coming by his job a quick hello and left?! Geez! That's cold! But the moment between Jack and Ootimus... Is a true father and son there. I see Jack look up to Optimus as a father figure. But so mothers day is coming to! I would love to see the son and mother time!
But mostly I hope you write a interaction romance between June and Optimus in mothers day. I really want to see Optimus makes her feel better. All in all good job!
| Creepy-Pasta chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
I'M CRYING! D'X SO HORRIBLY CUTE! X3 OPTIMUS IS THE BEST DAD EVER!
| haloangel21 chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Very nice! I loved the father and son moment between those two. Great work.
| Elhini Prime chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Awww! So adorable! And Happy Birthday! Hope its a good one! :)
| Benjyboy chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
This fic was very moving, I enjoyed reading it, but please remember that capital 'I' as it makes it easier to read. Overall, I really thought you caught the moment between Jack and Optimus.