Reviews for Missing Lines
MizuneMinamiki chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
This. Is. Too. Good!

I really, really like it! The writing is amazing, and the general idea for the whole story is just perfect! Bringing a bunch of scars into the picture to add to their bonding was clever (and cute!) because it shows how Maka does care for him! (And even in a kinda stubborn way:3)

I think I did see a typo here, though: [The lines on his lips most likely from where teeth dug trenches...] It just feels like you're missing a word or something...?

Either way, this was really enjoyed! Thanks for the read!(:

(:Mizune