Reviews for Fusion
MajorisAngus chapter 51 . 2/25
Es excelente! Pero, la historia de Elena sigo detestando lo que hizo. Jamás se justifica que se haya aprovechado de su situación y menos pq ella fue una víctima de violación en su niñez. Por el contrario debió saber más y ayudarlo de otra manera y que el todavía sienta cariño por ella es algo que tiene que trabajar todavía. Ella lo abusò y lo maltrato al presentarle ese estilo de vida siendo un niño en muchos aspectos todavía, ni importa si parecía un hombre físicamente. Muy fácil venir ahora a invitarlo a la boda, con todas esas palabras de bendito fui la víctima, me sentí herido por él, pero ahora ya lo hemos superado podemos ser casi amigos, nada ha pasado. LA, la! NOP! Aunque no haya más menores involucrados ella abusò de un menor y si tan arrepentida debe al menos reconocer eso ante Cristhian, no debí aprovecharme de ti. Por lo demas, amo la historia.
MajorisAngus chapter 36 . 2/24
Yep. She was a troll manipulate witch.
MajorisAngus chapter 24 . 2/23
Asking again, where is Sawyer and Rachel? Why they not are with Ana as CPOs? Just Ryan and C ask for new security they when baby Teddy arrive.
MajorisAngus chapter 20 . 2/21
I miss Elliot, Mia and Kate more action in the story.
MajorisAngus chapter 19 . 2/21
Why Ryan is the new CPO and where is Rachel and Swayer?
Munkeyfump20 chapter 51 . 12/16/2019
Wow thanks for the very good read. I would also like to wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Wilson68 chapter 47 . 8/15/2019
I’m on chapter 47 and so sad it’s nearly over. Your writing is outstanding. THANKYOU I might start all over again once I’m finished.
Wilson68 chapter 1 . 8/12/2019
Just finished last two books of this set, I’m so exited for this next one,it’s 12.30 am and I can’t wait till later today, I absolutely love this story, thanks for writing it.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/8/2019
You wouldn't say "Brit's taking I shopping," so don't say "Brit's taking Kate and I shopping." Use ME. "Brit's taking Kate and ME shopping."
Sellis5333 chapter 32 . 1/22/2019
The “balls” on a “brass monkey” are iron.
Sellis5333 chapter 16 . 1/21/2019
“HoldFast” from old sailing days. Hold on to the line (don’t give up any line). Its expanded into “stop”, “keep steady”, “think about what you are about to do”.
USN(ret)
Guest chapter 51 . 11/28/2018
This series is spectacular; I wish you'd find it in yourself to continue it. (I realize you've done a "future fic" about Teddy, but...). Your Christian and Ana are my favorites among all the emanations in fan fiction. Thanks for sharing your gift.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/25/2018
You wouldn't say "Brit's taking I shopping," so don't say "Brit's taking Kate and I shopping." Use ME. "Brit's taking ME shopping."

Also, IT'S is the contraction for "it is" or "it has." The possessive form is ITS (no apostrophe). "IT'S amusing to watch a dog chase ITS tail."
degfas chapter 1 . 10/5/2018
really enjoyed this series. hope you continue it.
subscriber chapter 3 . 4/19/2018
You wouldn't say "Brit's taking I shopping," so don't say "Brit's taking Kate and I shopping." Use ME.
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