Reviews for Miscellaneous Writing Challenges
Adriannu255 chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
I really liked this, but then... "his back was to her as he entered her" ...ROFLMAO! My brain broke trying to figure how THAT worked! Best worst sex scene I've ever read!
Starhunter79 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
These were so good. I couldn't keep a straight face. The second one was my favourite and the third was so bad it was good. I love your writing style and your stories are always so entertaining. All you were missing this time was a 'tortured' Obi Wan, maybe if some one interrupted them in the lift but that's a different story. Thank you for some laughs.
VisualIDentificationZeta chapter 1 . 2/22/2013

The only thing missing is the use of "sword" (of love or something like that) or "towering manhood", hahaha!
Feeding-The-Wolves chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
xD I love this! That is easily the best worst sex scene I have ever read! "Her womanly globular flesh"... super hawt. Well done!
meganangels chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
I like writing challenge # 11.
pronker chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Okay, let's parse this :

/sucking the caps of her teeth/ all I can think of is the dental bill after all this

/his back was to her as he entered her/ jgbajf;ljas;ljf;ljsal I can go no further