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cg037 chapter 10 . 2/5
A great story, I hope that you will continue with it.
Marion chapter 10 . 1/22
Cool :D
Vivement la suite!
Bonne continuation :)
WingsofaBelle chapter 10 . 8/9/2014
i love the protective crew and overprotective zoro! jealous sabo is so adorable! its better sabo than ace! Ace would go insane and definitely try to kill zoro and sanjii... I know its been almost a year since you last updated this story but i think its really awesome and i hope you continue! Thank you for writing this awesome story and for sharing it! Please update soon! i would really like to see ace's reaction to luffy's amnesia either learning about it by den den mushi or in person!
WingsofaBelle chapter 9 . 8/9/2014
oh gosh poor sabo! Sabo doesn't deserve such pain. Its not like he was the one to insult luffy and tell her to leave. He's just caught between his siblings fight... awww zoro you're so dang adorable! ouch that family photo thing will really hurt ace and sabo if she shows it saying this is my family's photo... cuz that would mean that she has a new family and they're not a part of it... ouch the pain... i do not want to be sabo when he tells ace that luffy doesn't remember him and that she has new brothers ...
WingsofaBelle chapter 8 . 8/9/2014
lying to ace... that will not go over well... especially when he meets sanji and he does that noodle dance to luffy. Hmmm now both ace and sabo can be called hot heads.. Oh gosh teach... Aww please don't kill ace.. i hate it when he dies. ya know what would be absolutely awful if luffy didn't remember ace until just before his execution. im pretty sure if that ever happens im going to flip over this table.
WingsofaBelle chapter 7 . 8/9/2014
why did mihawk let luffy hit him? She's not up to his level yet and i can't see him just standing there and taking her punches. Zoro and luffy are so cute! Are they going to be a couple? Sanji will be sanji. That dream that zoro had was so adorable since it revealed how his fear was losing luffy! Aawwwww
WingsofaBelle chapter 6 . 8/9/2014
ahh sabo... im surprised ace just let him leave... actually when i thought about it, i think that ace would be angry either a lot or a little. He doesn't know that luffy has amnesia so i think that he would think that luffy abandoned them since she was alive all this time and never came back or let them know how she was doing.
WingsofaBelle chapter 4 . 8/9/2014
i wonder if devil fruits actually work like that... split in half and fed to two people. I wonder if that would decrease the power per person at all. So ace isn't attempting to kill whitebeard, sabo is really a calming influence huh.
WingsofaBelle chapter 2 . 8/9/2014
WOW ace's denial was so sad! Ace must be feeling really guilty... Did the whole bluejam and sabo's father not happen or did sabo just escape? Do they think that luffy's still angry at them? i mean she never came back and they don't know she doesn't remember so...its really well written and interesting!
WingsofaBelle chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
wow this is really interesting! Ive never read a story where luffy leaves before ace! So luffy's getting her crew early! Yay zoro!
zenaku8yoru chapter 10 . 7/27/2014
Great story! Please update soon!
fangirl chapter 10 . 6/3/2014
Update! This is so cute! I can't wait for more!
Guest chapter 10 . 5/30/2014
:3 Try must Sabo! (Yod)a talk
LunarStar98 chapter 10 . 4/28/2014
Please continue, this is so CUTE! \./ I can't wait for Ace to Show up! heheheheheheh!
Fi Suki Saki chapter 10 . 3/30/2014
That was Cute...! XD

Zoro become super over-protective with some jealousness that made him doesnt want to let Luffy go! Awwwwwwww

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Luffy's hair still long?
I wish she will cut it a bit short like how Oda made female Luffy like.
I always had an urge to cut Luffy's hair if i see her with the long hair.. #sighed

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Well, i hope Ace doesnt meet Luffy sooner...
Because Zoro would be in danger...

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When will she remember Ace and Sabo..?

Wait- doesnt that mean she forgot Dadan too?!

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