Reviews for Making It Right
Guest chapter 62 . 4/9/2016
Wow ! That was amazing I am glad I finally got the chance to read this. It was beautifully written. The characters seem true to form and the emotions are so fully developed and just draw you in. So looking forward to the sequel.
Guest chapter 62 . 1/24/2016
I loved this story! You have a wonderful gift of writing and I do hope you will one day complete the sequel to this story. I too love the more emotional side of the characters which is why I hope to see more. I couldn't quit reading this when I stumbled upon it. Thank you so much for sharing your gift of story telling, it is indeed a beautiful world you've created. :)
jjgeraghty chapter 62 . 3/5/2015
Love this story! Really wish you would write a sequel!
AA - MamaBirdCat chapter 62 . 9/15/2014
i love this story... wow! what a set of adventures you have He-man/Adam and Teela face. The addition of Shera/Adora and captain sea Hawk was awesome..

the defeating of the bad guys and having Duncan and Sorceress married and happy was great...
Guest chapter 38 . 8/10/2014
i read some more chapters then i give you a a good review
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 62 . 8/10/2014
oh congragts you made me a happy reader
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 61 . 8/10/2014
wowow wow oh wow oh wow wow wow wow
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 60 . 8/10/2014
hes human hahhahahaha
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 59 . 8/10/2014
wow i liked the other crazy twists Teelas cousin is the replacement and not teela herself
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 58 . 8/10/2014
now to destroy his sister s enemies or basically capture them
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 57 . 8/10/2014
yesss! finally an attack on skeletor and the rest of his crew
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 56 . 8/10/2014
wow it was liked skeletor didnt care so much about evil lyn death yet he still did something he shouldnt put a temporily hold Teela is a strong powerful woman she and baby should be ok i think?
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 55 . 8/10/2014
twin power!
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 54 . 8/10/2014
wow lovers
marcus.edwards.3323 chapter 53 . 8/10/2014
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