A very promising start. Never seen this angle before. Keep reading.

Thanks for writing this !

KD

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY IF YOUR STILL ALIVE. IT IS ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READ IN RECENT YEARS.

hermione: draco treated me like absolute garbage the first couple years and literally attempted mind rape a few months ago. i should totally go to the ball with him and not feel guilty about brushing aside someone who bared his soul to me and did nothing wrong but not pay complete attention to me the last 1-2 days for very good reason. ill also not mention it to harry so he'll feel like complete shit the day of the ball. im a good person hueheueheuhe

People will tattoo all kinds of shit on their bodies, it doesn't need to be a creature or the eyes.

Hey there’s like a million steps between not doing anything and raping someone’s mind, Harry’s decision are never binary quit presenting them that way. It’s just bad writing “I won’t mind rape him so I have to sit here and quietly do nothing but accept the bullshit spewing from his mouth” He was more willing to get into a pissing match with other mages than he is a fucking muggle that he knows can’t so much as touch him personally and only wields power through his institution(which harry had obviously isolated him from in the moment) it ripped me out of the story and was really annoying.

This is building up to a really exciting climax. I love your ideas about ritual magic and the Hounds. I hope you rediscover your inspiration and finish this.

Hmmm, Wand works immediately, on a grown up.

Now who might poor obliviated Mr steel be? :')

And the story is now abandoned,

Great fanfic. I hope it will be finished someday.

Hermione's birthday is in September. She would be 15 by now and allowed to cast in Norway.

I am not even that surprised that Ehwaz resulted in accidental marriage. Harry was thinking of equal partnership when he cut it.

I am aware that Harry might not be expected to know this, but I still got to point it out.
LASER would not cut flesh cleanly! It would burn and boil it away.

He hid his runes and wings. I endured. Snape erased Steele's memory. I endured. Harry, after failing to kill the bastards, just pretended nothing had happened. With difficulty, but I endured again. But now he began to hide his power. I drop this shit.

I came to this story after reading Blindness, which was incredible, reading until the phone fell out of my hand.

I decided to basically read every story written by you, and began this awesome story about Old Magic, Magic born of blood and sacrifice even going in to the jungle to find an Aztec temple, which I have never come across in over 12 years of reading HP fanfiction, and the research you have put in! I willingly offer my service as a Beta if that will help get the remaining chapters on to FFN. Your writing and your storytelling ability are breathtaking, and I hope things on your farm and in your life allow for you to finish this incredible book. Thank you!

Terrible cliffhanger March 2023 and still no update. At least leave a note if you continue the work on other sites like archive of our own(A03) or wattpad.