Reviews for America's Next Top Model (H2o version)
Hayashi Mikako chapter 5 . 12/5/2013
こんばんわ。
私がみかこちゃんですよ.
私はあなたを助けるためここにいます.
あなたが興味深い.
返信しないでください.
Artemis chapter 5 . 7/17/2013
PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
rikki823 chapter 5 . 7/3/2013
mist
Guest chapter 5 . 5/8/2013
Najah has the power to controls all weather.
XxMeggyxX chapter 5 . 5/6/2013
Can not wait for the next chpter update soon please it is a good story
Cordy's lover chapter 4 . 4/16/2013
You know what they say it's always the quiet ones
ObsessedwReading chapter 4 . 4/12/2013
Great chapter. :)
H20Rikki chapter 4 . 4/11/2013
good chapter. ohh... suspisous... good on ya 4 what u said about Gazilionare
Guest chapter 3 . 4/7/2013
Love it make Emma and Cleo and Rikki tell Bella about Charlotte
ObsessedwReading chapter 3 . 4/4/2013
Great chapter. I can't wait to see hat will happen next.
howls-spirited-lab rat chapter 3 . 4/3/2013
This is pretty cool! Keep writing!
Hayashi Mikako chapter 3 . 4/2/2013
Much too short! Why did you bold the "Bella Hartley"? And Tyra would have called her full name, Isabella Hartley, not Bella since it's just a nickname.
Hayashi Mikako chapter 2 . 4/2/2013
Don't you think you're setting your sights a bit high, ten reviews and five followers? I really think you need to shape up your writing technique. Don't forget, the horrible grammar makes the story difficult to read, and you COULD have a better writing technique, however, continue with the story I think it's wonderful!
Hayashi Mikako chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
Well, the plotline is good. In fact, I like it a lot! However I do think that you really need to work on your grammar, since it makes the story a bit hard to read. I like the story but, no offense but your grammar SUCKS! It is very bad. However please continue this story, I like it. Just please work on all that spelling and grammar stuff. It makes the story difficult to read and then people might not want to read it. But I like your story itself so CONTINUE! :)
H20Rikki chapter 2 . 4/1/2013
Awesome chapter :)
This Najah character is interesting. She is a mermaid as well.
I wonder who will make it in...
Please update :)
Thanks
-H20Rikki
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