|Reviews for Detention|
| Anonymous Person chapter 1 . 11/21/2016
Oh man, Umbridge so deserved that. Despite all the antagonists in the series Umbridge will remain one of my most hated characters from the franchise.
| pikaree1 chapter 1 . 7/30/2016
Meh heh heh heh heh! XD Automail ftw! This is absolutely brilliant.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2016
This is hillarious! XD
The story made my day. Thanks :)
| Lydia chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
Simply brilliant! I can read it again and again and it doesn't get old. Top 5 of the funniest FMA/HP fanfictions. :D
| bibliophilea chapter 1 . 3/24/2015
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
| Nightmare Troubadour chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
Downside Number One of having a magical torture pen: if your victim has a steel prosthetic, he'll easily make your detention schemes backfire.
| Oakfeather31589 chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
That funny take that Umbrige
| Cheekybastard chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
Heh heh. Never read a story with that approach to it before
| Sincerely The Sign Painter chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
I love this XD
Ed was acting so innocent
Sincerely The Sign Painter
| Ren O'neil chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
so funny. should not have read in the library, though. I am drawing attention with my laughter. worth it.
| osirisredgirl chapter 1 . 1/5/2014
I'm not usually a fan of crossovers, but I found this one last night and it was just so perfect. XD You captured the characterization of both Edward and Umbridge brilliantly and it was quite funny! :)
| OstensiblyInsane chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
best. story. ever.
you rank in my top ten!
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
That was so funny. Didn't expect that, did ya, Umbridge?
| MeHasBadGrammar chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
Awesome! In your face, Umbridge!
| yaoiprincess101 chapter 1 . 8/24/2013