|Reviews for Sonic's Quest|
| Lord Kelvin chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Look at Sonic run. Sonic runs fast.
While thinking about women. The intro strikes me as generic and Sonic's thoughts seem OOC. Then again, if you want to have him go down the path of hormonal choices, a more psychologically involved intro is in order. Less distracting explosions and more substance, for example. A story rated M deserves a taste of depth in chapter one, as it is the chapter that generates subscribers. First impressions count.
Sonic randomly thinking about Amy after destroying Buzz Bombers...is random. Perhaps, a more plotted approach would benefit the story? Simply narrating pre-made images limits the potential of the underlying fic.
Have a nice, abuse-free day.
| Gallantmon228 chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Cool. I've always liked Sonic/Blaze. I just actually looked at the comic that inspired that and I think you did a good job. Hope to see it continue.