Reviews for Runaways
katmom chapter 7 . 11/22
Thanks for sharing this twist on canon. It was a very enjoyable read.

glayce Alves da Silva chapter 7 . 10/23
Oi eu sou uma leitora brasileira e gostei muito da sua história,
desireejones99 chapter 7 . 10/8
Very nice finish to excellent entertainment
Hermione J Krum chapter 1 . 9/7
What's pretty cool about Fred and George inheriting the Black title is that their grandmother, Cedrella Weasley, was born a Black. She was later disowned for marrying Arthur's dad. Makes you wonder if she was a Slytherin, since she wasn't disowned sooner. Ron hates all Slytherin and thinks they're all bad. If his grandmother was actually a Slytherin would he hate her, too?

Anyway, I love this story. I've read it multiple times.
Lugia'sChallenger13 chapter 6 . 9/4
Wait what happened to the Weasleys
Lugia'sChallenger13 chapter 7 . 9/4
Lugia'sChallenger13 chapter 4 . 9/4
Did you know that Kings Cross Station is real
Lugia'sChallenger13 chapter 2 . 9/4
Wait when did they decide that they would get married to save Harry I'm confused
Jim Red Hawk chapter 7 . 8/7
Ever think about writing a series of adventures while Lord and Lady Poyyercsail around the world? Might be interesting.

Brian1972 chapter 1 . 8/2
Fred and George are already adults at that time. Remember their great flight from Hogwarts?
Or them complaining that they are only a few month from being adults and still not allowed to enter the tri wizard in year 4?

It is also simple math since they were 3rd years in book 1 they would be 7th years when Harry is in 5th and given the entrance policy at age 11 you can't be a 7th year and still be a minor.
Guest chapter 6 . 7/12
You said Nevile was being home schooled/tutored with Luna, now he's the prefect how?
Guest chapter 5 . 7/12
I thought her name was Amelia ant Amanda
Guest chapter 3 . 7/12
You keep talking about the basin? I have no idea what you mean by this, never heard the themes, docks or any part of London referred to as this?
Why'd they not get crookshanks from the quranteen can't believe Hermione would leave her familiar behind.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/12
Why using American wizards and mumbles in the UK don't have dollars, and isn't the Hilton brand opened by Hilton?
Twinwolfsister chapter 7 . 6/27
you should do a sequel, do the grangers find out he is a lord? What became of magical britan? What of knockturn? Does harry never visit his folks graves I imagine that he would like to, What are some of the duties and responcibilities of the twins as head of house black, or harry of house potter? Political alliances with britians families and families in other countries? What about of all the things hermione wanted to do for house elves and other misunderstood or mistreated creatures like Remus? How did remus handle sirius words? Is there a party to celebrate the birth of the next generation? Why three does he have to make three heirs? He needs at least 2 as he unwittingly claimed the griffendor title when he married in that tartan, fate hates him hehe. which could be a whole new plot line for the poor potter. Maybe Ginny ends up a darklady because of not getting her way, jealousy and envy with Toms taint in her mind I can see that feeding off her jealousy and negative emotions until shes not really Ginny anymore. Just ideas to work from :)

Also, Nevil is being tutored, with luna so no he is not a prefect. Fred and george have been 17 for at least a few months by the time the will reading was done, and were very definitely not still living with the weasleys. Good plot but you need to keep your details strait if you are going to add them in at all,
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