Reviews for Runaways
MuffinRamsey chapter 7 . 6/8/2020
Really awesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2020
Right because families always wander around staring at each other's naked body. Sure. Right.
WeisseHex chapter 7 . 5/16/2020
Loved this story!Thanks for sharing it with us!
odonnellzoo99 chapter 7 . 5/3/2020
A good story that has some unnecessarily distracting elements.
odonnellzoo99 chapter 1 . 5/3/2020
I was going to comment on F&G's ages, but figured it has already been done and too late anyway.
Matt chapter 6 . 3/24/2020
Again, your story makes no sense. This takes place in 1996. All Humber Pigs were removed from service before 1995. Therefore, they couldn't have used any Humber Pigs in the operation.
Matt chapter 5 . 3/24/2020
Is there a particular reason you decided to change Susan's Aunt's name from Amelia to Amanda? I mean, it's always been Amelia. It's Amelia in basically every story on the Internet. But you had to change it for some reason. Or maybe you just couldn't remember what it was and pulled one that started with the same letter out of your head? Because of course it was too much trouble to look it up.
Matt chapter 5 . 3/24/2020
What's Tony Blair doing in this story? Harry's just turned sixteen. That means this takes place in the summer of 1996. John Major was Prime Minister. Tony Blair didn't become Prime Minister until May 1997. Idiot.
Matt chapter 4 . 3/24/2020
Wow. Just wow. You write some of the worst sentences in the history of English writing. Either you're not a native English speaker and writer or you completely ignored whatever education you had on English grammar and composition in school. Your teachers would be aghast.
Matt chapter 2 . 3/23/2020
"Hi, Mom"
Really? Mom? You do remember that Hermione is British? That British people call their mothers Mum, not Mom? Or are you just too dumb?
Matt chapter 1 . 3/23/2020
Pensive is an english word meaning engaged in deep or serious thought. What you meant to write but didn't is pensieve, a device in the wizarding world which allows people to view memories. There's a rather large difference between the two. It's all in that extra e in the spelling.
Vanadir chapter 7 . 1/26/2020
Thank you for a great story
Bookworm0485 chapter 2 . 1/10/2020
Ten thousand million is not a number at all.
10,000,000,000 -this number is 10 billion.

If you are going to give your characters a ridiculously large amount of money at least use an actual number.
Veronice chapter 7 . 12/26/2019
Enjoyed it. Thank you.
Rebmul chapter 7 . 10/26/2019
apparently they did pull the their heads out I seem to have forgotten
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