Reviews for Mute
ewan 91 chapter 10 . 3/21/2015
But can you think about go on... that's good and i'd like to know how it end...please?
ewan 91 chapter 10 . 3/21/2015
Ehi there! That's good! I hate Agamennone! Can i kill him. And Hector is not so bad... but
boycrazy30008 chapter 10 . 5/13/2014
I really like this! Hopefully you decide to continue the story!
Mythical and Magic chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Wow! Deep writing. I don't think i'd be able to live like this! Love the fact that Achilles defended his little cousin. I really love that sentence"lions always protect their young" so true. Keep up writing cool stories xxxx
Kevin chapter 10 . 5/17/2013
BEAUTIFUL!BEAUTIFUL! I love your writting, the plot, the character of Patroclus after the war, making him live also.
C'mon, do more, i'll be waiting ;D
Soso22 chapter 10 . 4/15/2013
cute :) keep going
Spiritblaze chapter 10 . 4/14/2013
Lovely chapter! I'm so glad Patroclus could forgive Hector. :)
Soso22 chapter 9 . 4/8/2013
hey :))
that was great
except when is pat gonna get his act together and stop weeping and crying about everything ?,,,,, if I was achilles I would be sick of him by now
I hope he start getting better soon :))
Spiritblaze chapter 9 . 4/8/2013
Yay! What a nice surprise to wake up to! :)

This is a very cute chapter (but "cute" in a sad way). I feel so bad for both of them at this point...

Soso22 chapter 8 . 3/27/2013
this was More than cute :))
please try to make the stroy as long as u can :))
Spiritblaze chapter 8 . 3/26/2013
Again, this is just too cute. I can hardly stand it! Ahhhh!

I just love the nickname, and I love how Pat wouldn't let him go. Poor kid...
Soso22 chapter 7 . 3/23/2013
amazing :) I like how you included a horse in the story :)
Spiritblaze chapter 7 . 3/22/2013
So again, I just love the end with Patroclus & the horse. Animals have a way of helping us take our eyes off ourselves, don't they? ;)

And it fits perfectly, since Patroclus is the type of person who's so compassionate towards others.
bluebirdheart chapter 6 . 3/16/2013
This a great story that you have created. I love how Patch survived, but not without this serious consequence.
I completely agree with how you have Patch reacting to the situation. Nice job.
Soso22 chapter 6 . 3/12/2013
this ch is tooo cute :))
I cant wait to see what is next :))
Thanks u
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