Reviews for Honoka's Master
pedrokotii chapter 17 . 1/2
A truly excellent piece of writing.
Pity It's discontinued.
StoneTheLoner chapter 4 . 10/24/2015
Dropped. You waste sooo much time on useless things. Things that don't affect the story at all.
StoneTheLoner chapter 3 . 10/24/2015
The good vs evil, light vs, dark focus you are giving this story isn't really my thing. Wouldn't it have been better to go with a grey Naruto? Capable of being the bad guy in the right circumstances, only to then turn around and be heroic. I always thought the good vs evil theme in story's was a bit naive.
shubhendu dutta chapter 17 . 10/3/2015
Another great chapter.
Jose19 chapter 12 . 9/7/2015
The style that Honoka has been taught is part of the killing fist, and the problem doesn't lie there but Yami as well because all of their masters practice the killing fist philosophy, and it is a process that consumes when you kill someone.

I only want to say don't forget that Kenichi becomes the strongest because he reminds me of Naruto not very talented compared to others but intense hard work, and training made him very powerful enough to defeat the Elder to win the hand of Miu because he does become the strongest.
Jose19 chapter 2 . 9/7/2015
The question is how will you deal with the sister of Kenichi because Kenich in the story becomes the strongest character because he does beat the Elder, and gets Miu's hand to marry in the story.
Jose19 chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
The story is interesting because he is from this world but now you have to give him a style of Martial Arts because Shigure is a Kunoichi of sorts in this story, and a master of using weapons, and if Naruto was from his world he would resemble Shigure in some way.
OnGuard chapter 2 . 8/15/2015
Of all the things you've could have done, you had to kill of his wife and child. F U.
Guest chapter 17 . 6/26/2015
Plz update
NarutoSpardaUzumaki chapter 2 . 6/28/2015
Interesting mention of the picture frame... maybe Naruto retired from the underworld because Hinata and his child have been killed?
Big shocker chapter 17 . 4/7/2015
im not gone lie this is the best story ive ever read on fanfiction please update
SeverlyLate chapter 6 . 1/15/2015
And... Good story came to fonish.
Pretty stupid manga with hand and legs all over the place started.
Bail.
bsdurler chapter 17 . 1/11/2015
please update soon
rinnegan18 chapter 17 . 11/20/2014
great story
Lord Sigfry chapter 17 . 11/4/2014
Really great
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