|Reviews for A Random Lottery & a Series of Near Mistakes|
| ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 9/23/2016
This was really well done. Why didn't Jasper enlighten Edward earlier? For that matter, this Bella was rather bold . . . why didn't she enlighten Edward on her own? Either way, I'm glad they made their way to each other. In her case, I'm glad she's getting what she's been clearly waiting for. I've found a pattern in your stories, having read them all in one day. I've noticed you've always got three specific things in each one. You may have more but, I've noticed only the specific three. Very interesting. I would've liked a little more of these two. The first I'm and the after perhaps.
| SanguineTaurean chapter 1 . 1/19/2016
Awww... I needed to read this sweet, fluffy, and humorous one shot after just finishing "Omens." You definitely deserved all of the honors, too!
Speaking of...if any of you have yet to read MissJanuary's story "Omens" I highly suggest grabbing a box of tissues, something to drink, moving to a quiet spot, then hunker down and read. Once you start it will be hard to stop plus it's complete and you can read it all in one go if so inclined, and I highly suggest doing so. It's amazing!
| shc92 chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
The road to discovery was really sweet. Enjoyed this. Wouldn't mind catching a peek of these two at some later date. :)
| pamaroo chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Awww! Sweet little story :-)
| RandyWriter chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
I have to say...great story. Again, very visual, from the clothes, the environment (like the musty cabin, the beach) to the way your characterers look. Very well done. Was in awe of your secret share, and how they just started b,urging things out. Great work. Had me teary and laughing (well when Rose and Alice were going after Emmett)! Great story! Bella is completely hiding behind the dark, tough look, to be the sensitive intelligent beautiful Swan! Loved it! Xoxoxo
| Melee03 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
| muzaklover chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
| Deletemyaccount201 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Ahh. I loved this! It was really beautiful and funny :) Consider a future-take? I'd kinda like to see these two later down the track... :)
| stormy315 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
awesome story! i really love that you picked a song of the The Cowboy Junkies', "Misguided Angel" is "our" (my husband and my) song;-))