|Reviews for Max's Crush|
| Jubilation Bells chapter 1 . 3/11
Loved this. So in character from everyone. Much more believable of a confession from Ash and Misty than any sort of grand cliched love proclamation. Good job!
| cid.neha chapter 1 . 2/21
This one is also good..
Max crush on Misty how cute!
| cutetwist chapter 1 . 4/7/2014
Oh I just love this!
| PokemonOtaku0909 chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
Max shouldn't want an older girl for a girlfriend. The little dude is nuts in this story.
| videogamenerd101 chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
["Having Togepi to care for really brought out a caring, sweet side of her." he mused.] The period at the end of the dialogue should be a comma.
[Max came to an abrupt stop, causing to rest of the group to stop too, and folded his arms, giving Ash a competitive smirk.] This should be "…causing the rest of…"
[He looked up, her expression was expectant.] Comma splice. Replace the comma with a period so the sentence will be two sentences instead.
[He imagined her with Rudy, which enticed the same blood boiling reaction it had when they'd first met him.] There should be a hyphen in "blood-boiling".
["Oh, and Ash?" he turned to look at her.] Ash didn't say this, so if you want to imply that he didn't, capitalize "he".
I came here from Do's and Don't's and I decided to check this out before continuing on. I have to say, this was quite cute! I like how you captured Ash's possible love for Misty and Misty's feelings for Ash so easily. The emotion details were great and this was very well written. Of course, I loved that Contestshipping mention in this, since it's my favorite Pokemon pairing and all. Drew and May are just adorable. xD
The only complaint I have is the fact that Max has a crush on Misty is very OOC of him. Sure, this took place during Battle Frontier after Max and Misty got stuck together so those two definitely have some sort of friendship at this point, but Max just doesn't seem like the kind of person to have a crush on Misty, you know. I've always imagined him to be the type who'd tease Ash about Misty. Plus, Max is too into being a smarticle to even think about his own love life. xP
But nonetheless, this was still pretty cute! Nice job on this one-shot!
| PrincessVictory chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
Awww this is too sweet! You're such an amazing writer Princess!:D And Pokeshipping is my absolute OTP, so of course I would nearly die from the shippiness of this!XD (Is that even a word? I don't think so... Anyway.:P) I really enjoyed how in-character this was. No gigantic declaration of love, bunches of awkwardness that only Ash and Misty could make together, and, well, I loved it!:D Guess I will have to read Do's and Don'ts now. :) I've already read the rest of your stuff. XD
| Chiuu chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Aww, such a cute and fun oneshot! Thank you for sharing. Reading this brought a wide smile to my face. :)
| Holly chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
That was TRUELY a great Pokemon episode with real AshxMisty love!
| xblueflowerx chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
I loved this! It was so sweet :D
| MilkywayScribbles chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
This is one of the best short AshxMisty fanfics I've read in a long time.
Keep up the good work!
| CharlieBoneFan chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Ash and Misty are the cutest couple ever.
| pommedapi chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Really sweet and emotionnal. Great job!
| Lover chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
LOVE this, I think it is amazing :D