Reviews for Buffy the vampire
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
I agree with the review below mine. I really didn't even read your story because I saw it had 15 chapters and just over 2k words. Please get a beta and put it all together. Then guess what, you completed the real first chapter!
Guest chapter 15 . 3/6/2013
You should get a beta reader. Then rewrite the entire story. Then put it all into one or two chapters. Your chapters are no more than small paragraphs. Good job on the story
brebre99 chapter 10 . 2/26/2013
This is awesome I liked it a lot
larnie chapter 3 . 2/25/2013
That was harsh but i loved it, cannot wait for the next
AnonymousGuest chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
oooo so will there be another chapter? i hope so:D
larnie chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
good start.x