Remind me to never mess with House Peeves!

Peeves the Prankster is brilliant! If you write other stories I hope you use him again!

So how does Amelia not know what was said between Sirius and Malfoy? Are you telling me she was smart enough to use a listening charm on those slavers, but they don't do that in a cell where they put Malfoy and another supposed death eater? Why did they even put them together, if not to try and get them talking and giving information away?

House Peeves, lol. It's different, for sure. And I do have to admit, I quite enjoyed Peeve's assistance with Quirrelmort, and had hoped Harry and Co. would befriend him and make him a more frequently seen character. I have to admit, I think the Weasley twins might be a tad jealous of Harry and his girls getting to be in a house whose namesake is a timeless troublemaker.

cool finale; i love it!

House Peeves: I love it! And having him as a help instead of a hinderance is cool. Can't wait to see what pranks he pulls.

I'm seriously thinking that at this point, Dumbledore is either completely evil or simply selfish and greedy

Nice! I like!

I continue to be impressed with the way you take your storylines.

I do have a question though. Maybe I missed it, but where in the final two chapters does it say what happened to Grindelwald?

Narcissa was too stupid to let Draco to see his father. She really give him up

Story started dragging around the tri-wiz cup, which didn’t include the protagonist. Also, don’t introduce a harem then do nothing with it forever. Finally, Ariana is an unnecessary, unbelievable, and annoying plot device. Why use clones when imperiling is easier… is it somehow less dark to clone and kill people? There are far easier ways with magic and potions to “rule the world” Dumbledore.

So Dumbledork is not just comically evil. He's clinically insane too. How fun.

Ah yes, FumbleDork is at it again. Trying to manipulate the entire world for the greater good.

The duels where more or less ok. The stupidest thing start as soon madame Bones believe dumbass. But what is worst you really think everyone who reads this is a moron as the writer. The crap start to pile

I had hopes that this story would be a very god one, but it started to devolve several chapters back and now I am having trouble understanding the plot. It is extremely overcomplicated and hopping abut all over the place. It has far too much diatribe of 'thoughts' and 'history' with very little action and especially sex. A teenage boy with six willing girls, and there is very little mention of sex? No way. Having lost the thread of the story, I am giving up on it.