|Reviews for For Now, This Will Have To Do|
| isacullen-timeguardian chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
Yay, I found your other hetalia fic nwn
Now that I have my computer I'll leave a review xD
I loved this oneshot, actually, I still haven't finished watching the whole anime, but I already like this pairing hehe
Oh and one little thing about your Spanish. As I'm Spanish (yay nwn) I find it interesting when I see it in english fics, and I just wanted to tell you something, in case you're interested.
When Spain says "Tue res muy sexy, Roma" I assume it's a typing mistake, it's "Tú eres muy sexy" and well, just that it doesn't really sound natural for a guy who's about to jump his lover XD You translated it as "You're so sexy" and in that context I would use "Eres tan sexy" In Spanish we usually don't say the pronouns (tú), as they're implied in the verbs, and about "muy" it's correct, but "tan" is used to emphasize things. So that sentence it's commonly used like that.
And when he says something like "se siente rico" or something like that, it's correct, though I recall only hearing that in latinoamerican countries, not Spain XD I'm afraid, though, that I can't come up with any other way to express it, so this is just so you know, besides it's perfectly valid too nwn
And this other little thing... "Cariño" is spelled with "ñ" XD However, it's well placed in the sentences and all, and I'm not one to talk about typing mistakes so... hehe
I hope you find this useful somehow, constructive criticism and all hehe (and if you don't understand my English please ask, it would be normal with me being Spanish and stuff... XDU)
Again, I loved your fic, the way you write it's really nice and I could follow your ideas perfectly so just thanks for this fantastic fic and I hope you write more!
| demoness of music chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
OwO Wow this is really good
| IDespiseTragedy chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
OMG This is one of the best SpaMano I've ever read! Believable plot, IC, and, of course, sexy smut.
| SotetMoon chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
That was wonderful 3 rough sex for the win
I love the fluff ending
| The Lord Writer chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
this was awesomeeeeee!
| Esor chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
Aww... lemon-flavored fluff, my faveorite!
| DarylAsskickerDixon chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
| GermanyMomiji chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
This was really good story. Personally I thought it was a little too too. The bathtub scene was soooooo sweet!
Remember the cause ...
| xD NaruSasuNaru chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Love it! LOVE YOU FOR WRITING THIS BEAUTIFUL FANFIC
| Shannon chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Thank you so much for this It was sexy and made me laugh too, I really enjoyed it! :)
| jUsTaNothErFuJoShi chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
This went from really hot to so freakin' cute! God I loved it, especially the flufflicious ending ouo
Yoou should totally make this a three part story that would be really cool XD
| Ethelwyn chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Huiuiui, that was damn hot! It was pretty funny that Spain was extremely slow to get the idea, but once he did, he was very much into it XD Very hot, very juicy. I loved it. Great lemon.
But really, even better was the bathroom scene. Having a cool hard-a s s show his feelings is always hard and you did very good on that. Showing his insecurities was very hard on Roma and that shone through beautifully. And of course it's obvious he'll try to deny it ever happened that way XD
I really liked this fic. It made my night _ Thanks for sharing, Cutie!
| VampireKissesUntamed chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
I am so loving your stories! :)
I like one of your bleach stories as well with renji and byakuya in tonight im gunna let you be my equal. i almost died laughing at the thought of byakuya spanking his horny red haired lover and making hm talk dirty. Your stories have a consistancy about them that i really like so please keep on writing.
| DarkSideOfTheLight chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
| SVI253APate chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
I can't wait for the next one! Loved it!