|Reviews for amnasia|
| A Simple Soul chapter 1 . 11/29/2013
Listen, 'hon. If you already know your grammar is bad, then why don't you try to fix it? Look for good, high-quality grammar websites. Read well-written stories and use their sentence structures and styles as examples. Do anything you can to study and improve your grammar. I'm not trying to "hate" you or "flame" you. I'm only trying to suggest that you improve your grammar so that people will read your stories and enjoy them. I hope you read this and take at least a fraction of my advice. Thank you for your time.
| coraline151515 chapter 1 . 4/9/2013
My great aunt sarafine is going to flip at this story
| Lia Alcona chapter 3 . 3/22/2013
Let me guess, non-english speaker?
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2013
amnesia: i believe this is the proper way to spell the title.
mess: in the first sentence you you mes
owns: in its place you put ouns.
cliff: you forgot an f.
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/9/2013
Hey :). So congrats on the potential Beta :D I read your profile and know that English isn't your first language so won't judge you for that. I'm actually here to give you some advice: GO. TO. It's gonna help improve your writing and tell you what a Mary Sue is 'cause i'm seeing your character as a Mary Sue ( which isn't a good thing )
Nonetheless I feel that you're trying and would suggest you take the offer on your Beta ( it's for your own good :/ )
Here's the Tvtropes ik for you :
Here ya go :D
P.s. Please don't think i'm flaming you. This is atmost creative criticism to help you out with your writing so that you can avoid future regrets. An advice from a troper to you would be for you to go through Tvtropes so as to get more advice and help in improving your story.
I see that you're working hard though and will frequently be checking on this story. TIP: Try capitalizing some of the words.
| BurnedToAsh chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
This story sounds really great and has a lot of potential but can I say something ? Can I please beta or just fix the grammar No offense to you or anything Not trying to be rude
| little miss BANANNA HEAD chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
It's okay. I'm sorry this isn't my kind of story. I don't want to flame you. I don't think I've ever flamed anybody. Flames are meant for pork chops not reviews. :D. It was just a little too boring. :(. Sorry.
| princessbinas chapter 3 . 3/4/2013
Can you please find someone to clean this up? I'm not trying to be mean, sorry if I do. Poor spelling and grammar tends to cause headaches. i would beta but I barely understand this and I'm already beta reading.
| Misery Severity chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
You know, according to the guidelines, song-fics are not allowed in FF, so I highly recommend you to take off the lyrics.