|Reviews for Birthright|
| Macamaquita chapter 4 . 9/23/2014
This story looks great. Hope you continue it. Please continue
| Jouaint chapter 4 . 6/16/2014
Great chapter. Please update soon.
| Lord rage quit chapter 4 . 3/26/2014
*insert internet saying here* Dude ur not dead! In all serious it's good to see a new chapter
| ShoutFinder chapter 4 . 3/18/2014
Good old Delphine, she stuck by. Now, do I know Calder? Is he an OC or canon? Still, I like him. Loved the bit of his exasperation. 'Really?!'
| ShoutFinder chapter 3 . 3/18/2014
Hmmm...I'd swear I heard Delphine say that Emma was seven in 4E191...ah well.
O.O MARCUS! NO! NOOOOO!
And yes, I do agree; Tacita never went into the Shivering Isles; she'd served Sheogorath, but not to that extent. Some other poor fellow had to go in there instead and spend eternity serving as a madman...until the next end of an Era dawned, at least. Blasted Jyggalag.
| ShoutFinder chapter 2 . 3/18/2014
Intriguing, intriguing, all the more so. Those plot bunny souls must have come from SOME review, because they bit me a long, long time ago. Marcus speaks in that same revered manner of Adria in almost exactly the perfect way Kanding and Sunjolf speak of Tacita. And an 'Aunty'...hmm, yes. But 'Delly' is a new one...
Emilia sounds adorable. And Delphine, Grandmaster before the Blades Order was sacked? I suppose she ought to have the job...
| ShoutFinder chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
Oh, good! For a moment I was wondering...nevermind.
This was intriguing, right from the start! I'm sure somewhere in the multiverse Sirsmia's rather pleased she has a sister somewhere...all right, HALF sister. Still, it's a bit hard to tell with Sirsmia. She was ever so fiery...
I could NOT stop wondering over Adria, and how much she and Tacita would've gotten along. Already I like her very much...though I suppose that we won't be seeing much of her given that the story takes place over a great course of time (hmm, that sounds like Bloodlines...)
I shall be observing this story with great interest...
| Jozern chapter 4 . 3/16/2014
Definetly interesting. Looking forward to getting to know Emilia and Calder (I suppose he's dragonborn). and how her presence makes things go around. Keep up the great job.
| SwallowingInk chapter 4 . 2/25/2014
Finally, someone's read my mind and decided to fulfill my secret desire to bring the Septim Dynasty back to life!
Martin's death was, for any number of reasons, the saddest part of Oblivion for me, and this most definitely looks like the beginnings of a beautiful redemption. I'm also halfway through what's posted of your main work, and I must say, I really like your style. Finding any decent writers who want to do more with the potential-filled complexities of Tamriel than stupidly copy the game quest lines in first-person point of view never fails to brighten my life. :)
Anyway, this is absolutely brilliant, and I would love to see more.
| WolFang1011 chapter 4 . 2/20/2014
You're back! Awesome. Right. Nothing much to say, really. Your pacing is spot on, as usual. Dialogue delivery was perfect. I just found one, small error. All in all, great comeback, mate. Looking forward to the next installment xD
| Duesal Bladesinger chapter 4 . 2/20/2014
I'm assuming that's the Dragonborn?
Great work with this chapter. Keep it up!
| Divine Protector of Skyrim chapter 3 . 1/4/2014
I like the idea of the story, great job. I would like to see what you come up with next.
| Daedric Princess of Madness chapter 3 . 10/9/2013
I gotta say, I don't review a whole lot here anymore, nor do I read AUs a whole lot as a whole (despite the fact that I'm writing one) but damn, you did a pretty good job on these chapters and I'm looking forward to any future updates.
| Genesis011 chapter 3 . 8/19/2013
Great story! I really hope this isn't abandoned. I'm very interested to see how the Dovakiin will be like, and how Emilia will change in 5 years. More please!
| Goldmaedchen chapter 3 . 7/7/2013
Man, the end is really sad. Must be very hard for Emma...Poor girl. Her life is already hard enough /
Anyway, great chapter!