|Reviews for What You Can't Control|
| Annie chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
Lovely chapter.. I think you really captured the dynamic of Mel and Wanda ;-)
| LeftHandedPeopleRule chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Yay! Melanie and Jared! Well Melanie/Wanda and Jared but all the same I loved it. I think you've really got the Melanie and Wanda's inner-conversations down to a t, and yet you also manage to capture both their own individual and mutual thoughts and feelings. Keep up the good stuff! :)
| furyofthetimelords chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
Interesting and really nice little one-shot. It's really good. .
(btw this is furyofthetimelords from tumblr)