Reviews for New Beginning
Lord Damon Markloff Darkling chapter 22 . 7/19
Looks good so far, jeep the chapters coming!
ThePhenoix11 chapter 22 . 4/6
Interesting concept so far but Naruto in sage mode could pick up a a giant summon with one hand... I think you kinda underpowering it
Zero-Tails317 chapter 22 . 2/23
Well, I'm liking this story. I'm mostly here for the NarutoxErza romance but I'd REALLY like to see where this story goes. I would be thrilled if updated this, til then.
Caitlin chapter 14 . 1/3
I like the "yellow flash" bit :)
Guest chapter 22 . 12/16/2015
Hurry up, what happens next?
Shadow of Darkness786 chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
Please update soon
Shadow of Darkness786 chapter 22 . 6/13/2015
this is a great story i hope you update soon
Dsman chapter 5 . 6/9/2015
Sakura why don't you love him
Dsman chapter 4 . 6/8/2015
ooh fancy
Dsman chapter 3 . 6/8/2015
Wait so Lucy just met Erza
Dsman chapter 2 . 6/8/2015
or join fairy tail
Dsman chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
he he Naruto is a wolf in sheeps clothing
Guest chapter 22 . 5/30/2015
Short chapter or not your story is great
Rikudou no Shinju chapter 22 . 5/4/2015
'100 jewels is pretty generous' 100 jewels $1 XD
Agent Frank Underwood chapter 22 . 5/3/2015
Good story, it looks like you were doing a fairly good job with this story. Is it abandoned?
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