|Reviews for On the Boundary Between Light and Shadow|
| Reversus12 chapter 5 . 6/11/2016
This is the best Naruto x Touhou story ever. The way you narrate everything is extraordinary. Mixing two totally different worlds sounds interesting and fun. I hope you still decide to update someday.
| O chapter 5 . 6/6/2016
Is this still being worked on? If not, can you upload a chapter saying that day discontinued or something ;u;
| Quelthias chapter 5 . 3/19/2016
I am impressed with the story, my favorite part being the interactions between the various factions.
I would like to see what happened to Obito, with him gone is Pein the leader of Akutsksi?
Please post a story about what happened when Obito entered Gensocko!
Perhaps after Itachi makes an appearance.
| Quelthias chapter 3 . 3/19/2016
Reading this is like reading an essay into Naruto politics and history, very well researched.
| Quelthias chapter 1 . 3/19/2016
An excellent start, I like an openning that leaves me hungry for more.
| StattStatt chapter 5 . 10/26/2015
I was mostly looking at the Touhou/Naruto cross-over section as a joke, didn't expect to find anything worthwhile in here. Then, I saw this story, and the summary caught my interest. And I can safely say, right now, that this is one of the best and most original Naruto cross-over stories I have ever read, and the fact that it's with Touhou of all things is just an added, but very lovely, bonus.
For one, it actually takes place in Naruto's world! And he's not this godly badass Gary-Stue that can fix everything by simply existing, making you immediately a more creative writer than many other authors on this site, and the setting, the fact that this not only takes place in the Naruto-verse and that it takes place before the main story line is an incredibly intriguing concept.
The way you choose to involve politics and village-relations instead of making a simple action story, and the way you include some less used characters like Hina and Keine is a very nice touch, and Fugaku's inner thoughts on the relationship between the village and his clan is a rather interesting concept (also the fact that you make him an actual character and not just this generic evil douche bag makes me just want to hug you to death).
Other than the fact that, well, we've yet to really get to know why exactly the Hakurei Barrier has disappeared and why they're in the Elemental Nations instead of our Outside World, though I'd guess we'll get to know it later down the road, and even then, this story and your writing alone is good enough to make me actually overlook the fact in case we don't get to know, simply because I like this story so much.
Otherwise, it would be rather interesting to see other characters interact with the Konoha residents. Like The SDM crew, Marisa, Nineball, etc.
Keep up the AMAZING work, looking forward for MUCH, much more! (o'w'o)
| MissGardenia chapter 5 . 9/27/2015
Huh. Bonding. Neat to see them getting along, given Keine's humanity focused attitude.
(Yes Mokou, Keine is growing :3)
No, you're not being too paranoid.
Fugaku, you really have no idea. I mean, they are logical inferences, but still.
On the other hand, potentially butterflying away the Uchiha Massacre because he feels they have other options? Delicious.
| pltrgst chapter 5 . 9/26/2015
great chap! narutos screentime is so little though..
| Reishin Amara chapter 3 . 9/25/2015
I find irony with the tale of the bamboo cutter and naruto...naruto frankly seems like a sequel to the actual tale.
| OBSERVER01 chapter 5 . 9/24/2015
excellent chapter. i really like hinas the uchiha clan doesnt get massacred.
| Lunar Wave chapter 5 . 9/24/2015
Great chapter. I'm glad to see that this hasn't been discontinued yet. This is one of the few Naruto Crossovers that I can actually enjoy, simply by virtue of the fact that OOC!Naruto doesn't exist (yet). And even if Naruto eventually gets a personality that is non-canon because of the Touhou Characters, I think you can make it believable.
As for the chapter itself, there isn't much to say honestly. It's well written, but nothing completely groundbreaking yet. I wonder how the relations between Gensokyo and Konoha are going to be like now that the Uchiha seem to be among the central pillars that bind them. I wonder what would happen with the Uchiha themselves. But wondering is usually pointless with stories like this. It could go anywhere and I could still be far from the truth.
Keep up the good work, and hope to see more updates to come.
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/7/2015
| Nitramy chapter 3 . 4/20/2015
25 years old
looks like Hokage-sama just broke the deal
Yukari is 17 years old, you know
| fellow chapter 4 . 1/22/2015
I seriously would like to read more of this tale.
| Admiral chapter 4 . 10/22/2014
Update, please update! This is...the best story I have ever read in FF so far!