Reviews for Unsealing Legacy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() uhm... is that how parents explain about bird and bees? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yo dude when r u updating? Its almost 3 years, this fic is lit! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, I still remember when this was being updated, man time flies |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shame it’s not completed. Love the concept of the story but it’s a-little slow. Naruto only being 8-9 really hampers a lot of this story as there is no big plot as of yet. Another thing too is that you got itachi’s age wrong, he is about 6 years older naruto and sasuke, not 4. Overall, not bad. The execution could use a little bit of work but it’s still enjoyable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I see where this is going…very sly of you to drop Muramasas parents now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have watched almost all of bleach and the second I saw that name I knew this person is probably going to end up being evil |
![]() ![]() ![]() we miss you. we hope your doing well |
![]() ![]() ![]() First Thank you for updating this interesting story and am glad that naruto and sasuke are getting along well with each other and helping sasuke training . Second I think sasuke and sakura or hinata and shino become great friends and sasuke can become first uchiha fuinjustu master and sakura and hinata become the first medical fuinjustu masters. Its a good thing that naruto explained to mikoto and fugaku about mask man and itachi childhood and his team. Third I hope that naruto will awaken his sharingan soon and also summoning contract:kitsune for naruto summoning contract: crows for itachi summoning contract:: phoniex for shisui summoning contract:: hawks for sasuke Itachi of crows sage Shisui of phoniex sage Naruto of Kitsune sage Sasuke of hawk sage. What do you think?. P.S PLEASE! Don't kill The Uchiha clan and shisui and mikoto and fugaku please keep them alive for konoha and little naruto and sasuke and itachi 's sake and if you have to please kill the uchiha council elders . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this interesting story soon. |
![]() ![]() I mean, is it "paranoia" if they *are* actually out to get you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update soon! I really want to learn more about what happens next and see if Naruto, Itachi, and Shisui are able to take down Danzo and Tobi and survive what’s to come together and alive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please continue this novel |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this novel and i feel you are portraying it very nicely as to how trauma forces a person to be smarter and cautious. Also the dynamic and jokes between characters is amazing, love it. Not taking chances with romace is a wise decision as for how many people want to force their fantasies into others work is not the time. The goal you set to portray Naruto as a cool sealing master has been met in the most satisfying way possible in my opinion, superb job. |
![]() ![]() This is a really nice and well-written story so far. However, tbh, I’m not a fan of how you made Naruto have a Sensei like Aizen. I feel like Uzumaki are literally the best at sealing (I mean, it’s what they specialise in), and plus, Uzumaki have a lot of chakra which could help in the usage of certain seals. So I’m simply wondering where Sousuke learned his seals from. It makes sense for the Shiomitsu clan to know it because you said they originate from Uzushio, a place consisting mostly of Uzumaki. So if the Aizen clan were just pretending to be from Uzushio, I’d like to know where Sousuke learned his seals from, considering the fact that he was the teacher of an Uzumaki. |
![]() ![]() This seems to be very promising but I shall wait and see if my excitement was for not. |