this is so stupid. they have lightning chakra to. you can use other elemnts to you know. it's the basics man, its easier with the one you have affinity for, but you can use any element if you have the chakra, and they're fucking ANBU and Itachi and Shisui. The lLeaf is fucked if that is all it takes to take them out.

just discovered this fic and im enjoying it so far, it's fairly entertaining to read and i look forward to the next chapter

Your last chapter was cliche and shitty, angering so many of your reader. Rather than trying to find what ruffled their feathers, you doubled down and wrote this chapter. And I dont think I can stomach this story anymore.

You are not beating yaoi allegations lol especially after the choice of clothes you choose. That shit looks sissy af.

nice chapter!
hope for more

kinda of a gary sue when he is just a child and solving every goddamn problem there is in the story instead of other characters helping themselves. i mean he shouldn't just know everything there is to know about other people cause what the hell. there is no story when naruto can just solve it by having some obscure book that he got the data from.
also what thr hell how does he know this stuff? why does he know this stuff? you do a piss poor job in explaining that and having naruto experience stuff.
he knows everything there is to know about anything plot related so that just takes the mystery, the mest of the story that is rhe character dynamics when only there is one dynamic there naruto and everybody else. he solves everything easily that has happened to him.
you have just made him everything canon naruto was not.
he gets everything genetics related that was not there in canon at all, also you made minato aslo shitty as he just a father that is the most important balcksmith all of a sudden so you break everything about him too he was just an orphan of the 2nd great war with nobody parents not of an accomplished clan and no uchiha bullshit either.
it is just so boring when there is no challenge to be had for the main protagonist when he solves it easily.
the tokugawa thing was not much of a challenge when tokugawa was just playing with naruto and co there.

god it is really annoying to read this half baked grammar dude! use a beta for every chapter man or don't upload until it is ready cause it is so hard to read the story

nice that you understand danzo doesn't hate the uchiha he just thinks they are a problem for konoha and he would do anything for konoha that HE thinks should be done not anybody else. he is making himself to be the chosen one or whatever for konoha when he is really not.
i feel like itachi and shisui are not potrayed well as fighters,itachi is a prodigy with the sharingan,he uses genjutsu like nobody's business and shisui uses the shunshin so well that he has the moniker for it so i hoped you could have done them justice and hell shisui has the mangekyo sharingan he could use the susanoo for that matter
also itachi gaining the third tomoe here eh i guess but you are really pushing that man really making itachi here so weak.

there aren't really any more dojustsu clans as only the byakugan and sharingan are the two dojutsu that are a thing that can be achieved by shinobi and the rinnegan is a thing but that is only possible with uchiha and senju blood or cells or some shit.

ah i dont really like that grandpa namikaze thing minato is supposed to be an orphan that has nothing special about him genetically, he just is a prodigy because of himself not because of genes.

like the fighting style of naruto. it is indeed very him.

tobirama never really held a grudge against the uchiha he was wary of them. he knew about their curse of hatred. hell he had a uchiha on his team before he died

also itachi didn't kill all the uchiha clan single handedly there was "tobi" there as well. he was cutting the military police up like paper.

the grammar might suck sometimes but damn can you write.

why are there demons here suddenly cause that is not a thing in canon as the tailed beasts aren't actually demons they eere called that before kishimoto chose the name tailed beasts(out of universe reason) and the prople called them demons because of the destruction and whatnot (they were ignorant af).

I don't think mamy people know about nature chakra as only the sages know about it and their summoners that the sage tells them to.

thank you for thinking clearly as no one in theor right mind would attack naruto and hiruzrn would use anbu to protect naruto as kushina was also kidnapped so there would be more reason to do that.
also in canon naruto was mostly ignored, glared at and hated for carrying the kyubi, maybe someone would throw him out a shop as we see in a filler i think. but outright attacking there would be outrage as that is a fucking child and minato and kushina's as well so hiruzen would take actions cause no way in canon naruto would still love the village as he does.