Reviews for The Death God Ashikabi
Meech Macko chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
Looks like Karasube picked up the WRONG opponent to deal with and Urahara got tonnes of experience under his belt and he is on Aizen level being a genius and so Karasube just seems to have got in over her head.

I'm pretty sure Isshin will try to keep tabs on his son as of now he got his powers back...

Setting up Seikirei for Ichigo part...try to make it slow and make him seem sceptical and suspicious on their sudden declaration of love and such coz I don't think Ichigo will just go with some girl who dropped from sky and proclaims her love suddenly or along those lines and that Ichi is her Ashikabe.

Better candidate for Ichgio could be Tsukiumi (she could be brought to her place with his power) and maybe other of your choosing.

You should also consider that Miya already had an Ashikabe and Kazhana girl loved or till loves that Sicko Minaka and she is always drunk...

Until next update...
Meech Macko chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Nice start...

So the Shinigami meet the seikirei's guess Karasube will be over her head IF she fights Urahara or Ichigo, that will probably stop her from being too high and mighty.

Still irked that about Musubi's personality and she is like 2 time air-headed than Orihime.

Anyway nice start...
DragFire chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
Very nice good crossover. I'm very excited to see the next fight.
Bob chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
the story is VERY GOOD, i agree with comentary bring kenpachi to story and wing karasuba, two berserks that love to fight awsome
Sempur chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
Come on i have idea. kenpachi wanna rematch with ichigo, just go when he got permision to investigate that city from gotei 13. And have him wing karasuba she is just like kempachi. Men you to do this
Rythik74 chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
The way Urahara handled the Sekirei situation without divulging about SS,is brilliant and true to his self.
Character wise everyone were just like their anime/manga selves,so no OCness,which good.
And Orihime's encounter with Akitsu and talking Akitsu with her,is just like Orihime.
And meeting in the inn and all hilarious activities which happened there was funny to read.
And the finally the battle between Urahara and Karasuba was unexpected for me.
But the MBI would have noted and knew about these two's dealing with the sekirei.
And then sent Karasuba to deal with them, Karasuba will be surprised in this fight against Urahara.
It will interesting as now the MBI will know that there is someone watching them and try to find out who.
These are the good stuffs about this chapter,now to the bad.
Like you said there are mistakes which can avoided by proof reading,hope you get someone to do it.
And you missed Matsu,Urahara should have sensed another sekirei hidden/living in the inn with others.
Either you willingly left it out or forgot or did not know about a pretty good chapter.
warrior of six blades chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Interesting job on your first chapter and on the fight scenes in it. Good job on keeping everyone in character in this story as well. I liked the interactions between Ichigo and Urahara because most of it was a little funny at times. I look forward to seeing how things go for Ichigo and Urahara in the next chapter of your story.
Fenrir of the North chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
This is great, looking forward to more. Any chance of an Ichigo/Miya pairing?
A simple fool chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
It always nice to see a good Sekirei or Bleach crossover. Good work. Just a suggestion, It would probably be better to focus more on the romance/humor because as you said, Ichigo will PWN everyone in a fight for the most part.
Rei Rusuragi chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
good beginning, will wait for your next chapter :)
alchemists19 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Interesting
Kami no Kage chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Interesting enough. Since Urahara is also present here. Not a lot of Sekirei left to wing this late in the game though, wonder who will be the lucky ones.
Rythik74 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Nice i like it for the fact that Ichigo has his powers and Urahara and Youruichi is with him.
Hoping to see Ichigo wing Akitsu or Tsukiumi or any other sekirei.
Since there are stories with Ichigo and Uzume and likewise with Miya.
Zaralann chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Nice chapter!
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