Reviews for Alone
will potter chapter 8 . 4/12/2013
class mate
Anonymous chapter 5 . 3/14/2013
This is an awesome story and the first one I have seen for this genre without any spelling or grammar mistakes. Well done! :D
HearTheMermaidSing chapter 3 . 2/28/2013
Ooh! A shock! I can't wait to see what it is! Love the chapter!
AmeliaFriend chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
I like the idea, seeing what a tribe that wasn't the Sparticles would do on the first day of the Disappearance, and I think your writing is really good although I do have to agree with VampireGirlxWolfBoy on a small point in which that if she was fifteen, she would have disappeared, but that's easy to fix - also, and this is just me being pernickity, I don't think that Dora would have been referred to as 'Doomsday Dora' in a newspaper article, it seemed to me as if it were a friendly nickname between colleagues and friends, rather she would have been quoted as 'Dr Dora Petty' - but if you want, just ignore that, it doesn't detract from the story, which I do like... a lot.
HearTheMermaidSing chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Love it! But Claire should have gone to the other world if she's 15. Don't mean to be rude if you find what I'm saying is rude. But seriously, continue! I like it.