|Reviews for Misfits Go to Hogwarts|
| graciepolar chapter 26 . 3/1
i cant wait! youre writing is very good and i havent noticed any writing errors. You do tend to have alot of things going on at once so remember to tie them all up eventually or else a lot of people will be mad(me included)
| Guest chapter 26 . 2/14
Need new chapter. sun fading... Eyes, closing... Darkness growing... GOODBYE CRUEL WORLD!... But seriously, update. Please. Your killing me.
| rose666 chapter 26 . 2/3
hi, just wondering how ling until you update this story?
| geust chapter 1 . 2/2
I meant l like Draco and Jasper not Harry
| geust chapter 1 . 2/2
I ment I like Draco and jasper
| Guest chapter 25 . 2/2
Paige Young 11,
pale skin,long strate brown hair, short than most boys by 1 or 2 inches
Sweet,kind of shy but outgoing with my friends
Harry and jasper
| redrose3443 chapter 26 . 1/19
okay, first i would like to start out by saying i like both misfit stories a lot. hermione having dean, seameus, nevil, and luna as siblings is awesome. her being imprinted to seth is great! and her being close to both harry and draco is cool.
now normally i don't like too many OCs cause it gets hard to keep track of them all, but that's not too much of a problem and it works i hope you don't make so many more characters that you can't keep track of the main character(hermione) and the main point of the story.(whatever that is.)
finally, though i enjoy hermione having lots of friends, family, and people on her side, i do hope that the misfits go through a real struggle. i know they came from an abused woman and all, but because we didn't really see that and ever since they've been part of the pack, they have not really had any problems. the new born vamps thing went pretty easy, with a god saving jake. the court thing was pretty one sided. and so far the group have not had any real problems.
i'm not trying to flame you at all, because i enjoy your stories and all the characters, however is seems as if the 'dark' side won't/don't stand a chance against the 'light' because of all the powers the misfits have. not to mention all the people they have on their side.(though i luv good slytherins.) it doesn't seem balanced.
i like how hermione is helping and befriending people(draco, sam, snape) but sometimes it feels as if it's happening too fast or too easy.(you understand what i mean, or are you confused?)
like i said, i like all the characters and all, but they all seem to have it too easy. even with ron or pansy the issue is solved immediately and with barely any trouble on hermione's side. can those two and lavender come together with some 'bad' people and try to plot against hermione's group and slowly start hurting/ taking them out(putting them in the hospital) and hermione's group have no idea what's going on until after a few friends get hurt? can a few 'evil/bad' OCs be created that hate hermione's group that way there is a strong conflict through hermione's seven years at hogwarts? i just want it to be a bit more realistic, so that you have people hanging on the edge of their seats, wondering what's going on? who is attacking the misfits? who will be next? just to add a bit of drama in their near perfect lives.
sorry for the loooong review, i just wanted to give you some ideas about the future events in this story. again i hope you don't take this as a flame, but as constructive criticism(though i don't think i've ever given it before.)
and i hope you update this story cause i am really enjoying it.
p.s. will bella appear during their christmas break? and can you plz make more seth/hermione moments? i just luv them together!
| lovebooks-P.M chapter 26 . 1/14
Hey there! I really like this fanfic! I cant wait for the party. When are you going to up-date? Hope you do soon! Im just soooo excited. I cant wait for the moment when Hermione and Seth get together, though it will happen later.
| Book nerd chapter 26 . 12/31/2013
Why did you stop! Keep going PLEASE! What happens with Sam and Fred?! I'm dying from anticipation
| Misfit4587 chapter 26 . 12/18/2013
Hey I finally got a profile wahoo!
| Misfit4587 chapter 16 . 11/24/2013
its been about 6 months since Olivia updated
| Hogwarts vampire chapter 26 . 9/18/2013
Amazing whens the nect chapter ? :)
| Me chapter 26 . 9/12/2013
Please update soon love it
| borntobeme chapter 26 . 8/31/2013
I love this series and everyone's characters! But please update soon! This story is awesome! Please don't give up on this story!
| RealLifeGemini chapter 26 . 8/18/2013
Please, please, please, update soon! I really, really, really, really, really love this series. I ecspeseially like Hermione's attitude in this. You are a fantastic writer, so keep up the amazing work.