| Reviews for The Guardian of a Second |
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   yindragonkiba chapter 4 . 2/17/2016 Fuuuuuuck need Mooreq |
| DeathCrawler chapter 4 . 4/11/2014 something i never got about the series themselves how could a wild pokemon know what there moves are called |
| Phantom Frost chapter 4 . 3/4/2014 You do realize that you made naruto make a bet where ash cant use pikachu then in this chapter you forget about it and make ash use him what the hell man |
| TheHokageNaruto chapter 4 . 3/2/2014 I like the idea, keep going with it. However, during ash and Normans battle you switched randomly between vigorath and slaking with no transition. |
| gameziod chapter 3 . 11/19/2013 GF eh...hhmmmmm Clair from Johto... :) |
| I Wish i was the avatar18 chapter 3 . 9/7/2013 hmmm i say it is Candice from the sinnoh region |
| ThePizziaMan chapter 4 . 8/29/2013 Where's the story:( |
| SnowTime chapter 4 . 8/24/2013 2nd time I heard this. The government better NOT! I write stories myself those darn Gov! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/1/2013 Never mind! missread |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/29/2013 If Naruto is a year older than Norman,but Norman and Mina are about the same age. How is Naruto Max's grandfather? |
| Ghest chapter 2 . 4/29/2013 If Naruto is a year older than Norman, but Norman and Mina are about the same age how is he Max's Grandfather? |
| keizer chapter 2 . 4/28/2013 Hey can u make his mate a demon? Or a beautifull woman? |
| SnowTime chapter 2 . 4/26/2013 PLZ UPDATE! IM LIKING THIS! |
| Lightningblade49 chapter 2 . 4/24/2013 Lol master student relations exactly the same as jiraya and Narutos. |
| Naruto-the-true-ninja-god chapter 1 . 3/28/2013 it might be good |