Reviews for The Guardian of a Second
yindragonkiba chapter 4 . 2/17/2016
Fuuuuuuck need Mooreq
DeathCrawler chapter 4 . 4/11/2014
something i never got about the series themselves how could a wild pokemon know what there moves are called
Phantom Frost chapter 4 . 3/4/2014
You do realize that you made naruto make a bet where ash cant use pikachu then in this chapter you forget about it and make ash use him what the hell man
TheHokageNaruto chapter 4 . 3/2/2014
I like the idea, keep going with it. However, during ash and Normans battle you switched randomly between vigorath and slaking with no transition.
gameziod chapter 3 . 11/19/2013
GF eh...hhmmmmm Clair from Johto... :)
I Wish i was the avatar18 chapter 3 . 9/7/2013
hmmm i say it is Candice from the sinnoh region
ThePizziaMan chapter 4 . 8/29/2013
Where's the story:(
SnowTime chapter 4 . 8/24/2013
2nd time I heard this. The government better NOT! I write stories myself those darn Gov!
Guest chapter 2 . 5/1/2013
Never mind! missread
Guest chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
If Naruto is a year older than Norman,but Norman and Mina are about the same age. How is Naruto Max's grandfather?
Ghest chapter 2 . 4/29/2013
If Naruto is a year older than Norman, but Norman and Mina are about the same age how is he Max's Grandfather?
keizer chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
Hey can u make his mate a demon? Or a beautifull woman?
SnowTime chapter 2 . 4/26/2013
Lightningblade49 chapter 2 . 4/24/2013
Lol master student relations exactly the same as jiraya and Narutos.
Naruto-the-true-ninja-god chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
it might be good
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