| Reviews for The Guardian of a Second |
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   Mr. Nine chapter 1 . 3/3/2013 this sounds good i cant wait to see the next chapter |
| bloodyhound17 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013 Oddball 8 jinchuriki as gym leaders there is no rikudo sennin |
| daniel 29 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013 A promising start to this story |
| Oddballlllllllll chapter 1 . 2/25/2013 Are the Jinchuuriki the Gym Leaders and the Rikudou Sennin the Champion? |
| The Flippant Writer chapter 1 . 2/24/2013 Interesting concept. Hopefully future chapters will be much longer. You should probably rethink the name of the fifth island. It seems a bit...lacking, I suppose. It's just a minor complaint. |
| I Wish i was the avatar18 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013 like to see where it goes |