|Reviews for The Guardian of a Second|
| Mr. Nine chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
this sounds good i cant wait to see the next chapter
| bloodyhound17 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Oddball 8 jinchuriki as gym leaders there is no rikudo sennin
| daniel 29 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
A promising start to this story
| Oddballlllllllll chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Are the Jinchuuriki the Gym Leaders and the Rikudou Sennin the Champion?
| The Flippant Writer chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Interesting concept. Hopefully future chapters will be much longer. You should probably rethink the name of the fifth island. It seems a bit...lacking, I suppose. It's just a minor complaint.
| I Wish i was the avatar18 chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
like to see where it goes