Reviews for A haunted Hook and a heated encounter
greysanatomiac007 chapter 1 . 8/29/2014
To be completely honest, I think you made Emma and hook have sex way tooooo fast. the story also lacked emotion, sort of like it was still in ruff-draft form. Next time, I think you should probably spend time figuring out what you want to happen next and develop a plot BASED off of your ideas. It seemed like you tried to cram as much as you could into this one chapter and I think that makes it lose the effect. I really liked your idea tho!
Captain swan chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
The sex was a bit disgusting.
You moved tooooo fast
bfggfdr chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
In your face Neal she'll never be yours
#KEEP calm and kiss a pirate
TashaRose chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Delicious, passionate, and emotional. I felt that it was still truly believable to have happened in the heat of the moment between Emma and Hook. Very good idea and well played out.
angry penguin chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
That is certainly a nice way to distract someone.
Soldier Warrior chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
I love this fic!
Lisa1972 chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
This was smutty & sad & beautiful all in the same story! Excellent Job! :)