Reviews for Changing Lives
Hadrian Eveningshade chapter 7 . 9/18
Not like it so far. While a prefect time travel is boring. This is not interesting.
Ethan Illinois Jones chapter 31 . 8/27
The fact that Remus automatically jumped to the conclusion that Harry was lying to them after he said 'dad' while suffering from blood loss is far from realistic. People suffer from delirium or even shock if they lose enough blood so whatever they say should not always be taken with a grain of salt. It just makes this chapter so irritating to me, because Remus logically shouldn't have come to the conclusion that Harry was lying!
Roxas fleur chapter 41 . 5/31
too bad .. cause it's good
Roxas fleur chapter 25 . 5/30
wow if that's true, it's so sad
Mitch chapter 41 . 5/10
Don't feel bad for abandoning this fiction in order to live a real life (what we all should try to do). The story is wonderful just as it is, and I got loads of entertainment out of it. Good luck to you in all your future endeavers!
Mitch chapter 28 . 5/10
This is a story that would make a 40 year old proud. The fact that you were only 14 when you wrote it, sure tells me that you have an amazing amount of potential as a professional writer someday in your future.
Mashrose chapter 3 . 5/9
You need to have OC as a tag. I was excited until then.
Ari Black-18 chapter 41 . 5/5
It's really sad that you didn't continue, it was an amazing story with so much potencial...
Guest chapter 16 . 3/28
It would be better if his animagus is a thunderbird
Devil.Harry chapter 31 . 3/13
i am really annoyed...
i never liked how nosy remus is...
and he is very insecure little coward too...
did i say nosy...i guess i did..
after starting i could not stop..but this seems to be a good point..cuz i dont like the development any more..did i say i really hate remus?
Devil.Harry chapter 2 . 3/13
good going..
Baublea chapter 15 . 11/25/2016
OOOOOH LOVE IS IN THE AIR
Tomb Raider and Walking Dead chapter 32 . 11/20/2016
Hmmm. I think your story is pretty damn good and there are a lot of unique things happening. And I think that over all your story is a really good story. The only thing I don't like is how Harry is very worried about the future and very determined to change things, yet he doesn't train, yes he's trying to get his transformation down but that's really not enough. I find myself confused with were Harry is on the power scale. Anyway I still think that your story is awesome and that its good over all. And you are a fanfiction writer so there are going to be mistakes (like how you didn't up the suspense with Remus finding out, maybe if you added a point of view of Remus being confused of all of the weird things about Harry, that way there is more suspense with Remus figuring it out enough to ask Harry about everything). However the whole thing with Harry trying to help Sev and Regulas but not Pettigrew was actually really good. It made him seem more human. Anyway again your story is good, it just has a couple of problems with the story development and character development. But even with the flaws I still found myself reading this in a day. And again you are a fanficiton writer, your learning and will get better gradually. I'm trying to give you my personal opinion on your story so that you can use my opinion for what it is. Whether you just disagree with me and ignore it (this is just one reader's personal opinion, or whether you use it, think of us like a beta reader. We read your story and we tell you our opinion so that you can use it for what you will. Mind you some of us just say we hate it and others just say they love it without telling you why which in both cases are really bad because they don't tell you why they think like that. Anyway thanks for writing.
Fast Frank chapter 16 . 11/3/2016
Just calling her "Minnie" should have earned a detention.
Fast Frank chapter 15 . 11/3/2016
And Harry continues his oblivious efforts to drive Peter into Voldemort's camp.
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