Reviews for A Pound of Flesh |
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Fortheloveofglitter chapter 14 . 9/8/2013 SO GOOD! I'm seriously enthralled. |
Anda Faith chapter 13 . 8/26/2013 Wow. This was extremely good! I'm shocked it doesn't have more reviews and favourites. I love your characterization. It's very interesting and, weirdly enough, this could be somewhat cannon compliant. I'm impressed. :) Great job! I enjoyed reading it thoroughly. |
Guest chapter 13 . 8/17/2013 Hermione seems to have been written by someone who has only an outsiders perspective on humanity. Also, the idea of NP-hardness isn't what Hermione meant. She should have just said NP. NP-hard has somewhat technical definition involving reducibility. (and even NP requires a notion of problem size) |
Guest chapter 13 . 8/15/2013 Hermione seems to have been written by someone who has only an outsiders perspective on humanity. Also, the idea of NP-hardness isn't what Hermione meant. She should have just said NP. NP-hard has somewhat technical definition involving reducibility. (and even NP requires a notion of problem size) |
TwistedTale chapter 13 . 8/2/2013 I am eager to read more. I liked how you characterized Tom and Hermione, in my opinion it was well done. There were a few awkward sentences where it took me a few times of reading it over to grasp your meaning. I would recommend reading your work out loud and see how it sounds, that should help it become smoother and even more enjoyable to read. Over all well done so far! -Twisty |
ozzymandius chapter 13 . 8/2/2013 That was really good. Loved how you wrote both Tom and Hermione, stubborn to the end. And Riddle's love for hearing his own voice has done him in again XDD The arguments between the two were very well-done. A very enjoyable read. Thanks for writing :) |
countesscee chapter 1 . 7/18/2013 Witty, LOL. Made me giggle. I just can imagine Tom Riddle and Hermione Granger talking. |
Geeky Queen chapter 13 . 4/30/2013 Oo Oo Ooooo! i luv it now keep writing please. it CANNOT stop there |
Guest chapter 9 . 4/9/2013 wow what a creative torture idea! making her forget what she prized most , knowledge! are u a programmer per chance? a lot of computer references and metaphors in there , im enjoying this fic quite a bit! cant wait to read the rest . |
Lizuca chapter 13 . 4/6/2013 Please write a sequel to this, I really want to see what happens, you can't end on a cliff hanger! |
EvangelineWren chapter 13 . 3/17/2013 This doesn't seem finished. You need to add to it. I want to to knowm for instance, what happens once they leave the R.O.R.? |
LCB chapter 13 . 3/13/2013 Good job! |
LCB chapter 8 . 3/13/2013 He's cheating somehow. |
LCB chapter 7 . 3/13/2013 Oh no who's he going to kill? |
LCB chapter 5 . 3/13/2013 Which spell? |