Great story!

Ending sucked, though. Hermione didn't require any intelligence to get out of that, only massive luck and Voldemort holding a huge idiot ball. This last chapter needs a rewrite.

I loved this chapter. Wow, this is getting really interesting!

Holy EFFING beach balls! This is rather darker than I expected. Still very good though. I must read more.

Oh dear... This isn't good.

Holy beach balls! That was AWESOME! You had me completely lulled into complacency, just as Tom had Hermione! I was expecting something malign eventually considering that Tom Riddle is involved and Hermione is clearly meddling where she should not be, but I was not expecting that, and certainly not right then. Absolutely marvelous! You deserve WAY more reviews for this! With that in mind, I shall endeavor to give you a few more.

Yep, still liking it...

Oo. Very intriguing. I really like how you've done the entire chapter without any thought or action. Just give and take on a page. And I like how you've written Riddle so far. It sums him very well in my mind. I'll reserve judgement on your Hermione until I've read a bit more, but I really like what I've seen in this chapter.

I'm absolutely stunned by your work. Is there an update coming up, and if not, can you pretty please write some more? This fanfic deserves a lot more attention!

That was great because I loved the reasons you gave Tom for hating muggles and Hermione was so intelligent and quick-witted! The arguments they had with all the hypothetical talk and everything were brilliant and so well thought out, which I'd just like to congratulate you on.

I do like this ending ;)

I am a steadfast lurker but I liked the story very much and could not resist your challenge. Thus, I review. Fast pace, well written dialogue that is actually interesting (though the 12th chapter could use some revision, the dialogue gets a bit convoluted and some of the ideas suffer), and good characterization: Your Tom Riddle is better than the original, more interesting and more terrifying. Hermione is certainly in character and handled skillfully. One of the best stories I've read in a long while, that ends swiftly and satisfies but nevertheless leaves several avenues open for further exploration. Loved it like Gollum loved the Ring. In a less creepy way, of course. Keep on writing!

Is there going to be a sequel? Please do one it feels so unfinished. I love what you have written though and I just want to see more.

Amazing! Xxxx

I must say that was really interesting. Are you going to write a sequel? I would love to read that.
This was so different from all the other lovey dovey stories that I'm deeply impressed. I liked the plot, I liked your style and I hope to hear from you again!

Please tell me there is a , if not I might cry. xD