|Reviews for Dimensional Realities: Setting Dawn|
| Reshiramgirl88 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
| LightStories chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
I have to admit, your first two chapters are amazing. However, you have to fix some small punctuation errors here and there, nothing big. Try to make to characters' sentences flow a bit better, because some conversations seem to be a little choppy. Your attention to detail on the characters and the background is absolutely on par. I hope to see more chapters soon!
| Ninfia-Fan chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Wow, excellent. I thought this would be starting with the main character waking up on the beach. Good intro.