Reviews for Lumos Mortalis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() reALLY interesting to see where this is going I even followed the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its been so long since you updated please do soon.:) |
![]() ![]() Ooo me likey |
![]() ![]() CONTINUE |
![]() ![]() Hermione is getting dark, a place people know all too well. It's good how this is so relate able to all types if people. Nice job |
![]() ![]() Malfoy sure does run his fingers threw his hair a lot lmao |
![]() ![]() Jesus the bloody chapter was long alright, but I liked it made me get a bit of a smile. I have to say this story totally makes me look at the characters way differently. It's a brand new perspective. I actually genuinely like it. It's very interesting. That's saying a lot coming from me since you know I'm not to big on reading :) anyways nice job looks like ill be reading this for a while |
![]() ![]() ![]() really brilliant- very touching :) sad though :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me thinks a flashback is needed for some explanationnnnn...! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just want to know when is Hermione going to get fed up an escape the mess with Ron and let Draco, Pansy, and Blaise back in to help her.. The last attack should open her eyes that Ron is going to kill her if she don't make a stand...Update more soon |
![]() ![]() I loved this. It kept me reading it and i didn't want to stop. I WANT MORE. let draco kick ron's bloody ginger butt once and for all! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the interaction between Pansy and Hermione! The only criticism I have to make is that there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but otherwise its great. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I like the fact that Draco and Blaise actually care about what's happening to Hermione. I have a question for you. Do I just have afaulty memory or was Draco a lot meaner before you reposted this fic? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter, hopefully nothing bad happens to Hermione! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for updating! It was a really great chapter! :) |