Reviews for When A Phoenix Cries: Severus
Mimi rose blossom chapter 1 . 6/29
Is so sweet to read it from Severus’s perspective. I absolute love this series. Eager for more
Aryn chapter 2 . 6/19
I actually really love how you wrote the two complimentary companion works together like that. It feels much more complete than if you had just switched back & forth from thier different POVs.
ANGSWIN chapter 13 . 10/24/2016
I really love this series and Severus's viewpoint is my favorite. I have noticed that other stories tend to make him out to be very dark and violent, but I have long thought that he was just lonely, misunderstood, and underappreciated. He only needed the right person to help bring him out of all that. That's why I love the way that you portray him.
strangecloud chapter 13 . 1/10/2016
I am completely and totally in love with this story! I think it's phenomenal and writing it from both points of view? You're fantastic! I absolutely have to go check out the next part!
BlueWater5 chapter 13 . 10/31/2015
Great story!
BlueWater5 chapter 6 . 10/30/2015
Love seeing what's going on when the two are not together.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/25/2015
You need to look up the distinction between "lend" and "borrow". Your writing is good but small details let you down
jensteed chapter 9 . 12/30/2014
Aww poor Severus :'( that's a really sucky situation to be in, fake boyfriend to the girl you adore.
jensteed chapter 5 . 12/29/2014
I'm sorry, I keep meaning to review on this and the companion piece but I'm jumping back and forth at every chapter just dying to read more! This story is bloody fantastic, absolutely captivating. I love that you've done the exact same story from two different perspectives, it's genius. I've never read a story done in this way. Oh, I've read ones that switched throughout but not covering the same thing constantly. I'm blown away by it, it's an excellent idea. Reading from a teenage Severus point of view is so much fun and I'm constantly fighting down the temptation to just read straight through his (I mean, come on it's Severus Snape! Who could resist?)
Well, I think I've rambled on enough, lol. Back to the story I go :D
Summer Leah chapter 13 . 1/28/2014
As I was re-reading this story, it occurred to me that I'd love to see some outtakes from Albus' POV. Unless you're planning a twist/big reveal with his character...anyways, maybe something to think about? Hope you finish the next chapter of Old Magic soon!
Nella Hyuga chapter 13 . 10/18/2013
Cuuuuuuuute!
Sandysmom chapter 13 . 8/31/2013
Severus is so sweet! I hope to get to read some scenes from his point of view in the second part!
her illusion chapter 13 . 8/30/2013
"Okay, Mr. Potter. For this demonstration, I am a Death Eater. You are fighting for the Order of the Phoenix." Potter was just starting to nod when Moody's wand somehow materialized in his hand and Potter went flying across the room to land on a conveniently placed pile of cushions. There had barely even been time for me to recognize the wickedly powerful Impedimenta for how swiftly it had been executed. Moody sighed, "Mr. Potter, you are dead." hahaha that last line!
Anonymity chapter 13 . 8/29/2013
Are you still going to write a second part or have you abandoned the idea? It would be a shame because it's a very good story.
sofarsogood chapter 13 . 8/25/2013
is there a sequel to this story?
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