Reviews for Perfection
AlinaLotus chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
As usual, another perfectly lovely Ten/Rose piece. Love it! Thanks for sharing :)
sami1010220 chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
ForeverShippingJohnlock chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
LOVED this fic! it was simple, but the feelings expressed were complex and really beautiful. really well written :) "But when he was around her, all those titles seemed to vanish and he was just the Doctor, nothing more than a man desperately in love." - loved that line :D brilliant job :)
no name please chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Very nicely done! It was a good read, very sweet and a nice little fixit/what-if for those of us who miss the Doctor and Rose :) My only piece of constructive criticism has to do with grammar. There are a few too many commas, especially in lines such as this: "People, who had not fought in wars or seen their entire species burn, because of their actions. People, who could love her completely, without reservations." You didn't need to put a comma after "people." Otherwise, though, this was great! I really enjoyed it :)