Reviews for Swan Song
rjh1960 chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
Interesting story.
cherryhilz chapter 2 . 7/21/2015
Ok, I'm hooked. Love this!
Edlovesme chapter 2 . 7/21/2015
Oh boy, that's what he was afraid of.
Payton79 chapter 2 . 7/20/2015
Oh no! I somehow had a feeling she's be gone on the morning but to find her like that must really hurt. I only hope she didn't just jump at the next guy but was in that situation without her consent.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Payton79 chapter 1 . 7/20/2015
I can't understand why you didn't win. I'm loving this.
gracefish21 chapter 2 . 7/20/2015
maphie chapter 2 . 7/19/2015
Bella is a bit of a "free spirit".
Melany333 chapter 2 . 7/17/2015
can't wait for more
SLKerouac chapter 2 . 7/16/2015
When Edward wakes up Bella is gone. He looks around his apartment and it just the way he left it. There was nothing knew. He looked for a note but there was none. He finally got up, showered and wanted to eat. His van was dead so it was a place close to home. After eating it was back home. Thinking more about his life and now he knew that he would have to call his parents. When he called Esme answered. She was so surprised to hear Edward's voice. They talked more and she told him that he was going to come for dinner. She wanted to know what he wanted her to cook. Edward told her what he wanted. Then telling he that he did not know when he would get there since his van was dead. She told him that she would be there in thirty minutes and to be ready. It was grocery shopping and then dinner. Edward was full and when he got home there was food in his place and his frig full. Later that night Emmett called. He wanted to know if babydoll was there but Edward told him that Bella was gone. He liked Rosie but he did not get her number either. Then Emmett talked Edward into going with him back to the bar that they found the girls. Edward met him there and it was just another night. Fans wanting autographs. The music was not really good either. One of the fans was hitting on Edward but Emmett came to the rescue. Edward drank a few more looking for Emmett but could not see him. Needing the bathroom which was out of order lead to the back door and a port-a-potty. As Edward was headed there he heard noises. When he went to look there were two guys over someone. Edward called to them wanting to know what was going on. As he was walking towards them they took off leaving the person on the ground. Edward looked and asked if this person was ok. When he really looked he saw that it was Bella. She was not moving. What happens now? What does Edward do with Bella? Does he take her home? To the hospital? What had these guys done to her? Will Edward go and get Emmett to help him with Bella? Does she have something on her to get a hold of Rosie? What will Edward do now to keep Bella in his life? Will he change things now? Will he get a better apartment? A better car? A place where Bella can live and be safe? Will Bella let Edward take care of her? To let him in her life? What has Bella been doing? What was her life like to have her in bars and out late? Next!
eliza41 chapter 2 . 7/16/2015
tff000 chapter 2 . 7/15/2015
yikes, hope b is ok
tff000 chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
good :)
boydroses chapter 2 . 7/15/2015
Was so happy to see this! Can't wait to read what's next. Thanks!
gracie7236 chapter 2 . 7/12/2015
Loving this! I was a teenager in the 90s, so this is fun to read. Can't wait to see where you take this. I've missed your writing. Thanks for the update.
RTP4ME chapter 2 . 7/14/2015
Ohhhhhh no!
What happened?! :(
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