|Reviews for Swan Song|
| maryannabella chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Lord I so want you to continue this one! Great job.
| Erikajo chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Loved it! Will there be a chapter 2 entitled "After the Shower"? First place in my book. :)
| Meadowgirl552 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
This story just needs to be told more, I cannot wait to find out more about Bella
| trixietraci chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
LOVED. THIS. You mean you didn't win this contest? How is that possible?
Anyway, I loved the mystery here. There's so much still left to be told & I hope maybe you'll continue? I want to know WHO Bella is. How she knows Rose. How she got into the bar. How she got to be so sassy! Etc!
I totally pictured the 90s grungy environment, the bar, the clothes, the vibe. I was in a teenager then & it brought back a lot of memories.
I'm going to put this on alert, just in case you decide to wrote more. :)
| jule2 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Would love to see where this is going. Can't wait
| LaSpia chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
This is so fantastic, so well-written and begs to be a multi chapter story. (Oh, right, it's us begging, oops!) Really, this is an amazing opening chapter, pulling you in, romantic, sexy and mysterious. And the music has all kinds of potential. You have a gift!
| lovmeedward chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
I really loved this story, I hope you continue it.
| robsjenn chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
eh, voters in contests don't know what's up. this is great. you really evoke the 90s (baby doll dress with denim on top!), you used a real (now closed) and legendary grunge music venue, and it's like you know seattle with your scene-setting (yes, no umbrellas allowed for locals).
i do wish we saw a little bit more of where these two go after tonight. i'm all for mystery and you don't have to tie up every loose end, but there are some interesting threads here that could be carried for another chapter or two. does b live in forks or on her own in seattle? why won't she consider what comes the next day/living day to day? etc.
thanks for writing!
| Rochelle Allison chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
| annaharding chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Fun story - thanx for sharing!
| Lesley282 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Hope you continue this!
| Nicffwhisperer chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
gahhhhhhhd this was one of MY very very favorites! This reminded me so much of a different perspective of There is a Light! Michelle and I were texting about this one when it was anonymous and we just LOVED it! I'm begging and pleading for you to continue this hot-as-fuck connection. Great story, great writing, not that I expect anything less from you. Love love love.
| Fangster Ofluv chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
This was the best story by far! I really hope you have plans to expand or at least a follow up chapter to explain the loose ends.
| shaz308 chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Thanks for the one shot. I don't think you would have come last! Unless you tied with a whole lot of stories. Again I find that hard to believe. Looking forward to more of your work, thanks.
| Bella Ami chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
Love the hell outta this! Any chance you will expand?