|Reviews for Reaching Daybreak|
| Winry1021 chapter 28 . 3/8
Well that was something powerful. Damn, this chapter was very sad but it held lots of feeling behind it, which was really enjoyable. War isn't something reserved for fiction- things like this happen all the time, often while we sit at home peacefully. It's tragic and depressing- and the chapter emphasizes that harsh reality that we as living beings face. Great writing dear, keep it up. Hopefully good news awaits in the coming updates!
| Sawyer Fan chapter 28 . 3/2
What an exercise in writing! Whew! Intense and a half!
Wolfram forced to kill someone, and then freezing due to the horror of it. Excellent writing and making the reader feel what Wolfram was feeling.
Great scene between Yozak and Wolfram. Yes, war sucks, but if you're attacked, you gotta defend yourself and unfortunately death happens. I agree, it would have been unrealistic to not have Wolf have to kill to survive. It's not that he wanted to do it, but he didn't have any choice.
Of course Conrart losing his troop was terrible. Did love that he held Wolfram close to him, not wanting him to let go. Was glad too baby brother was able to do some healing.
I know Wolf blamed himself for what happened, but if he and Yozak had been there, they might've been killed too and then Conrart would have died from his wounds, etc.
Excellent, angst filled chapter. I applaud your wordsmithing (if that's a useable word).
Hope college is going well for you. Got a job too? I bet you are busy!
thanks for not forgetting this story for us readers! *huggles*
| Guest chapter 28 . 3/2
I was speechless, description of war is awesome, thank god I have not been through something like that and not know if it corresponds to reality or not, but just imagine it is terrible.
Now it is turn Wolfram's... It's a chapter really fantastic!
| Winry1021 chapter 27 . 2/22
You are so creative, love ya! Anyway, this chapter held a lot of feelings for Wolfram, poor guy. Rage, subordination, embarrassment, lonliness, fear, longing, nostalgia, sympathy...I mean damn, he goes through so much! I hope everythign turns out all right in the war. Please don't be a sadist and destroy my hopes and feelings! :) Great writing , pacing, and story development! Keep it up!
| Winry1021 chapter 26 . 2/22
Oh shnap Wolfram is the center of a love triangle! Quite a strange development but hey it works. I'd like to see where you take it. The letter was cute at the end and I'm glad it addresses how ridiculous sharing all yourn love equally with everyone is. Ah, adult, wise, responsible Yuuri is so much better! The chapter was sad to read since it emphasized Yuuri and Wolfram's parting, but it was really good. I had to look up what osculate means, so yay, learned a new word! Nice job as always!
| Sawyer Fan chapter 27 . 2/17
Uh oh, got another brother going douche bag on poor Wolfram. Better watch it, Conrart...little brother or not, you don't go humiliating him in front of others, others who don't think much of "little lord brat" to begin with.
Aw, poor Tilly. Felt bad for her, but it was a nice conversation they had. Helped them both.
I'm wondering what this armor Wolf has to wear is going to mean to his performance on the field...is it going to help or is he going to have to rip it off to function properly.
And...is he going to have to defy Little Big Brother's orders and not use his magic? That St. Fred guy is still a factor isn't he?
Guess I will have to patiently wait...pooh...
| soulxspirit125 chapter 26 . 1/26
Awww what a sweet letter Yuri wrote.
| Sawyer Fan chapter 26 . 1/20
What a chapter!
All the lovey dovey stuff at the start...can't say enough how I loved that! But the boys should take it easy with the 'getting busy' since they have serious owies.
Tough choices for both of them...I can see both sides.
Glad to see Gwendal stopped being anal retentive (and did he seriously chuckle? Did anyone get that on camera?) and show is baby brother some support.
Whoa! Ken might have the hots for Wolf? Well, Wolf is beautiful, so I guess it's not impossible to believe. I know some ship Shinou and the Great Sage (can't spell the other name off hand), and it can be chalked up to Ken being attracted because Wolf looks so much like Shinou. Well, I read somewhere they were half brothers so I wouldn't go for that theory personally.
Actually I was kind of disappointed that the show dropped the reactions of others to Wolf's looks. The fact he brought back the near dead with just a look of his beauty, or how he had a crowd of women swooning over his defeat of the thugs, or how he had to wear a cloak to hide his 'extraordinary looks'. The series could've had so much fun with that.
Awwwwwwwwwwws on the sweet letter Yuuri wrote...*sniffles* Liked how you brought up the Bear Bee incident from early on in the series. One of my favorite episodes and loved it in the manga too.
I'm thrilled you are determined to fight for yourself. Yes, there will be bumps along the way, but like you said, as long as you deal with it in a productive fashion, it won't get the best of you. Much love and hugs sent back to you!
| DreamDancer99 chapter 26 . 1/20
I loved this chapter. And the Murata having feelings for Wolf... what a surprise. Lol. Keep up the good work.
| Guest chapter 26 . 1/20
Ok I don't often write reviews because I'm addicted to fanfics and read dozens of them on a daily basis, but this story really touches me I literally only wanted to read one chapter before learning for my test at midnight. In the end, I was up until five in the morning, nearly sobbing along the way and I regret nothing.
The way you portait wolfram and his breakdown is just so unique! I've read a lot of stories where he just like... gives up on the world and where he looks just so weak.
But the way you write it... I can't even properly describe it, he's simply so pure and missunderstood by the world and I can understans exactly where he's coming from! And you do all that without making him look ultra-weak, it just works perfectly!
Also, I looove how you don't write endlessly long passages to describe a scene. And still the story is so beautifully detailed and you manage to create such an amazing atmosphere
Somehow exactly those things happen, that I want to happen, without me even knowing that I want them to happen.
To sum it up: I'm in love. Thank you for this beautiful story (; v ; )
| damons-hot-as-hell chapter 26 . 1/19
oooo i cnt wait for more
| eccentric petite fleur chapter 26 . 1/19
The feels between Yuuri and Wolfram AND Murata and Wolfram. I ship both of them so hard.
Well, thank you for the update! I look forward to the next.
| Winry1021 chapter 25 . 1/14
Ah, this chapter has to be one of my favorites! I love the emotion that went into the discussion about Eileen and about Wolfram's improvement and feelings. Seriosuly, girl, you need to be one of the writers for this series, you do such an amazing job and you always make it interesting and meaningful. Their love is so beautiful. And so are you. ;)
| Pippy chapter 25 . 1/8
Get on that computer or whatever you use and start typing immediately!
I can't wait for the next update!
You're story is AWESOME!
| theabridgedkuriboh chapter 24 . 1/4
Awesomeness with the fight scenes. I felt like I was right there.
And Murata...the hell man...I thought you were better than that to stray away from death and violence. You sound like you don't give a shit.
Can't wait for Yuri to wake up