Reviews for The Day I Decided to Make You Mine
fanficnewbee chapter 1 . 5/24
Wish you wrote a whole story from this. :D
CloudZzFluffyBedsOfWhite chapter 1 . 5/18
This is one of my favourite fics of all time, I'm so glad I found it again!
It has all a Harry Masterpiece needs the GryffVsSlyth insults, the dash of danger, the inner workings and frustrations of a dark lord, Mpreg, a devilish seductive sin on two legs that is the dark lord, a debauched Harry, with a dash of time travel and Mpreg with humor. How you managed to get all of that in a story of under 4000w is beyond me. Kudos to you.
The last scene of the present Voldemort was hilarious and yes pls do add more chapters to this like five steps how I made Harry Potter mine or something. Step one; get through the pesky wards LOL
Sex scene was good; alluring but not too detailed for such a small part, the present Voldemort definately agreed that it was just perfect, I think he's looking forward to being the future Tom Riddle and teasing his spying past self lol
NetherNymph chapter 1 . 4/27
I'm absolutely in love with this one-shot! When I reached the end of the chapter, I was near anguished when I realized there wasn't more! You have no idea how many times I've read it since first stumbling upon it. It would be amazing to see just how his wooing of Harry would go about, considering the war and everything currently happening.

Dammit, now my mind is coming up with many different scenarios and plots twists to a story like this. Unfortunately, I do not have the time to even ponder on creating a story related to this. So asking for your permission is completely moot. As for it being your first written sex scene, it's actually pretty well done! It was in no way rushed or overly long, and I like that it wasn't disgustingly graphic or without enough details. You found the median that most writer's are still unable to use! It was amazing! (:

I love the way you portrayed Harry and Tom's future relationship, especially adding their future children into the mix. I thought it was the cutest and sweetest thing I've ever read! •ω• And to think that the minutes he saw future Harry, Voldemort found him absolutely beautiful. The most exquisite creature he has ever beheld. Whoo, I am completely enraptured by this story. Such a teaser! It's like watching the trailer for a long awaited Kdrama. I love it!

Hoping you'll find some inspiration, and awaiting with much anxiety for news,

yuutakeiamz chapter 1 . 2/22
more! need more. please
SaiyaCat chapter 1 . 2/16
Hahahahaha Awsome
tom chapter 1 . 12/29/2016
love this of the best one-shots in this fandom..plz continue it!
werwolf-yasya chapter 1 . 12/9/2016
I love this sweet story, thank autor.
BloodLikeRubies chapter 1 . 12/4/2016
Alice-Italy-Haruhi chapter 1 . 11/14/2016
It was funny in the end I wonder if Harry ever found out the reason why
Nicole Moore chapter 1 . 10/13/2016
Beautiful absolutely beautiful and Priceless to the look on Voldemort's face as his future self looks back at him it's hilarious you have got to keep going I Can't Get Enough
Gerbil154 chapter 1 . 8/28/2016
I love it! But I think Voldie should think about fixing his face before trying to get in the wards... Just a thought.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2016
Wow, I know it's been a while, but I would definitely love to see this continued! I love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2016
U should totally continue this into a chaptered story
alice22 chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
This is so cute that I would love to read another chapter or 2. Please!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2016
So will he find one or not to get to Harry
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