Reviews for Forgiveness
Guest chapter 2 . 4/6/2016
Pleaseee moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Guest chapter 2 . 4/30/2013
Loved this - the two POVs.. You write so well, the emphasis on both sexual and romantic and values chemistry. Others hint at it , but you illustrate it really well.
clarec97 chapter 2 . 4/21/2013
Great plot, wonderful mood setting, please don't end here, please write more, this should eb a M not just T.

Please consider, I am sure I am not the first to ask for more chapters, I believe I will not be the last.
Guest chapter 2 . 3/9/2013
Awsome
Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Wait, what?! Changed to T instead of M? Does that mean there'll be no awesome Mirandy scene? Noooooo, please include the hotness that they are. I'm so upset. :P

Please please still make this an M fic? Please.

Sorry to be a brat.

xxx
WickedWitchElphie chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
I like how you did Miranda's side to the meeting. It gives insight into what she is think while she makes a proposition to Andy. Cant wait to see where you take this.
XD chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
This is crazy. Completely crazy!
Update soon pleasee
magikedforyou chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Wow! Really good; but I have to say I'm slightly disappointed that it's complete and there's no scene of Andy waiting for Miranda in her bedroom and the sex that follows.
None apply chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Okay, I'm in love with the premise! I think it's great:) However, I think it'll be easier to read and easier on you if you find a way to merge both perspectives cohesively. I was really looking forward to seeing some progression in your second chapter. I'm happy to see it from Miranda's point of view but just a tad disappointed. Once again, I LOVE this story..very much. I'm very excited to see more of it.
ravenfairy chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
So glad you did another story is amazing! The emotions holy lord. It was beyond incredible. I guess i will have to sort of use my imagination to think about friday night hehe. :)
Lil'WelshDragon chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Thanks for part two - but this is still to good to be dropped ;)

As much as lots of readers - I'm sure - would enjoy reading about the weekend to come, I would particularly love to read (preferably both their perspectives) on the moment of Miranda coming home BOTH Friday AND Monday night.

Think about it...! Such a good story deserves to be continued! Just saying... ;)
jh728 chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Wonderful chapter. I really liked seeing Miranda's perspective.
Thanks for the read.
You wouldn't want to consider 1 more chapter would you?
sweetmint101 chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Are you going to write any more on this story? You've got a great beginning and I think it'd be awesome if you continued at least through the weekend.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
I'm so excited to see this continue! Please update soon.
archie319 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
I love it! Well done! Thanks for sharing!
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