|Reviews for Forgiveness|
| CrazyBeCat chapter 2 . 4/2
Well darn it, lol, I was bamboozled! That's alright, I like this take too, seeing the conversation from Miranda's perspective.
"Too late, she had realized that Andrea Sachs was someone she could love." - Well hopefully they can reconnect and it won't be too late! As the last bit says "IT felt an awful lot like... hope."
Bummer to not get to see what happens in the bedroom, but to see the conversation from Miranda's POV was enlightening in it's own way. Very nice. I liked it :)
| CrazyBeCat chapter 1 . 4/2
My goodness, what a beginning. Very interesting.
"You will be mine to do with as I please for the weekend." - That's both super hot and also a little terrifying.
A very interesting take on what after Paris might have been. Dark, naughty, and touching on that line of "too much." Interested in reading the next piece to it in a moment.
| eelojnil chapter 2 . 3/15
So cool to have both perspectives on what took place.
Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/6/2016
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/30/2013
Loved this - the two POVs.. You write so well, the emphasis on both sexual and romantic and values chemistry. Others hint at it , but you illustrate it really well.
| clarec97 chapter 2 . 4/21/2013
Great plot, wonderful mood setting, please don't end here, please write more, this should eb a M not just T.
Please consider, I am sure I am not the first to ask for more chapters, I believe I will not be the last.
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/9/2013
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Wait, what?! Changed to T instead of M? Does that mean there'll be no awesome Mirandy scene? Noooooo, please include the hotness that they are. I'm so upset. :P
Please please still make this an M fic? Please.
Sorry to be a brat.
| WickedWitchElphie chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
I like how you did Miranda's side to the meeting. It gives insight into what she is think while she makes a proposition to Andy. Cant wait to see where you take this.
| XD chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
This is crazy. Completely crazy!
Update soon pleasee
| magikedforyou chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Wow! Really good; but I have to say I'm slightly disappointed that it's complete and there's no scene of Andy waiting for Miranda in her bedroom and the sex that follows.
| None apply chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Okay, I'm in love with the premise! I think it's great:) However, I think it'll be easier to read and easier on you if you find a way to merge both perspectives cohesively. I was really looking forward to seeing some progression in your second chapter. I'm happy to see it from Miranda's point of view but just a tad disappointed. Once again, I LOVE this story..very much. I'm very excited to see more of it.
| ravenfairy chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
So glad you did another story is amazing! The emotions holy lord. It was beyond incredible. I guess i will have to sort of use my imagination to think about friday night hehe. :)
| Lil'WelshDragon chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Thanks for part two - but this is still to good to be dropped ;)
As much as lots of readers - I'm sure - would enjoy reading about the weekend to come, I would particularly love to read (preferably both their perspectives) on the moment of Miranda coming home BOTH Friday AND Monday night.
Think about it...! Such a good story deserves to be continued! Just saying... ;)
| jh728 chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Wonderful chapter. I really liked seeing Miranda's perspective.
Thanks for the read.
You wouldn't want to consider 1 more chapter would you?