Reviews for Forgiveness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have always wished for a chapter 3 of this story so we could learn the twins reaction to Andy moving in with them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this. Shame there isn't a 3rd chapter so we could see Miranda's reaction when she walks into her bedroom Friday night at 9pm and sees Andrèa there waiting for her. Maybe one day we will get a sequel that gives us the story of Andrèa moving into the townhouse. And how Miranda explains it to the twins. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really love this story just wish it was a lot longer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I wasn’t expecting this. Well done. |
![]() ![]() I liked how you told the story from both POV. Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well darn it, lol, I was bamboozled! That's alright, I like this take too, seeing the conversation from Miranda's perspective. "Too late, she had realized that Andrea Sachs was someone she could love." - Well hopefully they can reconnect and it won't be too late! As the last bit says "IT felt an awful lot like... hope." Bummer to not get to see what happens in the bedroom, but to see the conversation from Miranda's POV was enlightening in it's own way. Very nice. I liked it :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() My goodness, what a beginning. Very interesting. "You will be mine to do with as I please for the weekend." - That's both super hot and also a little terrifying. A very interesting take on what after Paris might have been. Dark, naughty, and touching on that line of "too much." Interested in reading the next piece to it in a moment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So cool to have both perspectives on what took place. Beautifully written. Thank you for sharing your gift with us. |
![]() ![]() Pleaseee moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee |
![]() ![]() Loved this - the two POVs.. You write so well, the emphasis on both sexual and romantic and values chemistry. Others hint at it , but you illustrate it really well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great plot, wonderful mood setting, please don't end here, please write more, this should eb a M not just T. Please consider, I am sure I am not the first to ask for more chapters, I believe I will not be the last. |
![]() ![]() Awsome |
![]() ![]() Wait, what?! Changed to T instead of M? Does that mean there'll be no awesome Mirandy scene? Noooooo, please include the hotness that they are. I'm so upset. :P Please please still make this an M fic? Please. Sorry to be a brat. xxx |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you did Miranda's side to the meeting. It gives insight into what she is think while she makes a proposition to Andy. Cant wait to see where you take this. |
![]() ![]() This is crazy. Completely crazy! Update soon pleasee |