Reviews for Forgiveness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Really good; but I have to say I'm slightly disappointed that it's complete and there's no scene of Andy waiting for Miranda in her bedroom and the sex that follows. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I'm in love with the premise! I think it's great:) However, I think it'll be easier to read and easier on you if you find a way to merge both perspectives cohesively. I was really looking forward to seeing some progression in your second chapter. I'm happy to see it from Miranda's point of view but just a tad disappointed. Once again, I LOVE this story..very much. I'm very excited to see more of it. |
![]() ![]() So glad you did another story is amazing! The emotions holy lord. It was beyond incredible. I guess i will have to sort of use my imagination to think about friday night hehe. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for part two - but this is still to good to be dropped ;) As much as lots of readers - I'm sure - would enjoy reading about the weekend to come, I would particularly love to read (preferably both their perspectives) on the moment of Miranda coming home BOTH Friday AND Monday night. Think about it...! Such a good story deserves to be continued! Just saying... ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful chapter. I really liked seeing Miranda's perspective. Thanks for the read. You wouldn't want to consider 1 more chapter would you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you going to write any more on this story? You've got a great beginning and I think it'd be awesome if you continued at least through the weekend. |
![]() ![]() I'm so excited to see this continue! Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Well done! Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that was not what I was expecting at first, but I really like it so far. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did a fantastic job on this chapter. I love it! I can't wait to see how Andy is going to deal with this wonderful challenge. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent! Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG - What a roller coaster my emotions did dead center in this story. I am tempted to ask for a sequel, or a part 2, but I also Think that this story stands very well on its own. Miranda is really being brave, and Andy as well, but for MIranda to risk this-wowsers! Great job - I'm so glad you sent me the link. I've been a bit unaware of new stories since I arrived in the US. Got out of my routines, I guess. |
![]() ![]() You havvveeee to continue! Please? x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful. I loved Andy's extreme swing in emotion. I'm glad it ended on the up tick. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the unexpected but great read! :) Did you plan on this to be a one-shot? I hope not! It's really worth continuing! |