Reviews for Forgiveness
None apply chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Okay, I'm in love with the premise! I think it's great:) However, I think it'll be easier to read and easier on you if you find a way to merge both perspectives cohesively. I was really looking forward to seeing some progression in your second chapter. I'm happy to see it from Miranda's point of view but just a tad disappointed. Once again, I LOVE this story..very much. I'm very excited to see more of it.
ravenfairy chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
So glad you did another story is amazing! The emotions holy lord. It was beyond incredible. I guess i will have to sort of use my imagination to think about friday night hehe. :)
Lil'WelshDragon chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Thanks for part two - but this is still to good to be dropped ;)

As much as lots of readers - I'm sure - would enjoy reading about the weekend to come, I would particularly love to read (preferably both their perspectives) on the moment of Miranda coming home BOTH Friday AND Monday night.

Think about it...! Such a good story deserves to be continued! Just saying... ;)
jh728 chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Wonderful chapter. I really liked seeing Miranda's perspective.
Thanks for the read.
You wouldn't want to consider 1 more chapter would you?
sweetmint101 chapter 2 . 3/6/2013
Are you going to write any more on this story? You've got a great beginning and I think it'd be awesome if you continued at least through the weekend.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
I'm so excited to see this continue! Please update soon.
archie319 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
I love it! Well done! Thanks for sharing!
WickedWitchElphie chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Wow that was not what I was expecting at first, but I really like it so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Obsidiana402 chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
You did a fantastic job on this chapter. I love it! I can't wait to see how Andy is going to deal with this wonderful challenge.
emeraldorchids chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Excellent! Thanks
Gun Brooke chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
OMG - What a roller coaster my emotions did dead center in this story. I am tempted to ask for a sequel, or a part 2, but I also Think that this story stands very well on its own. Miranda is really being brave, and Andy as well, but for MIranda to risk this-wowsers!

Great job - I'm so glad you sent me the link. I've been a bit unaware of new stories since I arrived in the US. Got out of my routines, I guess.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
You havvveeee to continue! Please? x
jh728 chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Wonderful. I loved Andy's extreme swing in emotion. I'm glad it ended on the up tick. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for the read.
Lil'WelshDragon chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Thanks for the unexpected but great read! :) Did you plan on this to be a one-shot? I hope not! It's really worth continuing!
guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
The plot makes this fic a rare addition to the dwp fandom. I have read hundreds but the storyline of this was simply unique. Bravo.
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