Reviews for Harry Potter and the Four Heirs
Snowdove30 chapter 4 . 2/28/2013
This is totally awesome! Can't believe that I am just now discovering this wonderful story. Very original... Looking forward to reading more chapters and finding out what happens. Can't wait to find out what the Queen is going to do, and for the plans for the wizarding world.
harryfan160889 chapter 10 . 2/28/2013
I love your story, but the only drawback here is Harry/Hermione pairing. Its just that I always thought them as siblings and can never imagine them as lovers. I was actually hoping for Harry/Susan and Neville/Hermione pairing. I do hope you would keep the romance to a minimum and concentrate on them changing the world. I would like to continue reading the story. I also love that you are updating around 2 chapters a day. Hope you keep it up. Can't wait to see Dumbles going down!
Lightningblade49 chapter 10 . 2/28/2013
So the Old man has a plan to bribe off people to keep him in Azkaban to bad he doesn't account veretisism into his thoughts things are going to start to go very pair shape for him and his reputaion will take it's first big hit!
Id like to see how he explains that an Innocent man must suffer in Azkaban for the 'Greater good' and just what is this Greater good.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/28/2013
This story is great. This is the first Merlin helps Harry out that actually makes sense. All the characters are believable and the set-up is so well thought out. An excellent plot, combined with good writing. This is definitely a keeper. And I love Queen Elizabeth. That woman rocks. I just finished the Hermione's Rant which made me laugh. I think Harry has come up with the way to calm her down that doesn't involve drugs. Smart lad. (This is just an emotional response, but... SAVE DOBBY! G I really am looking forward to seeing Harry meeting him for the first time.) Keep up the excellent work and I will be anxiously awaiting a new installment.
michaeldavidgeng chapter 9 . 2/28/2013
cool story
MishaySahila chapter 9 . 2/28/2013
I am enjoying your story. I can't wait to see what comes next.
Goldencoyote chapter 9 . 2/27/2013
awsome, keep going
The Wandmaker chapter 9 . 2/27/2013
I enjoy this story a lot. The portrayal of Queen E. is wonderful, and you have a great eye for detail. The only problem I have, really, is Hermione.

Don't get me wrong. I realize you need one muggleborn heir to make the story interesting, and in terms of an established character, Hermione is the only way to go. But I really don't think I could abide yet another shrill Hermione bossing Harry and the entire world around. I was actually relieved when Harry shut her down at the end of this chapter. Let's be frank - you don't give Susan or Neville half the detail and page time you give to Hermione. I really hope she isn't taking over this story, the way she ends up taking over most fan fics. And then, by age 12, she's the love of his life and the unofficial Mrs. Harry Potter.

BTW-I personally don't know why writers feel the need to always pair very young characters off. Sometimes a story is just a good story with characters as good and loving friends.

Anyhow, love that you've made Harry an interesting Earth Phoenix. Hope he can have some fun chats with Fawkes. And I can't wait to see what you have in store for Hogwarts and its many denizens. Should be terrific!

Thanks for a great read!
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 9 . 2/27/2013
Fun to see how Hermione was using the information she obtained. Thanks for sharing!
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 8 . 2/27/2013
Great to see the kids get their first cube lesson. Thanks for sharing!
mwinter1 chapter 9 . 2/27/2013
Awaiting more.
Helenap chapter 9 . 2/27/2013
This is a great story, I love the idea that the Queen has magic and isn't afraid to use it. Can't wait for the next installment.
LADY1984 chapter 8 . 2/27/2013
A Brilliant story. Please, Keep it coming.
white-winds hunter chapter 9 . 2/27/2013
Smart harry is the best
Coru 32 chapter 9 . 2/27/2013
love this story thanks alot
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