|Reviews for Beacon|
| it's time to ramble on chapter 4 . 9/17/2013
Wow! I loved this chapter, especially the way you introduced Superman and Lois Lane, with him blowing out the cigarette - very elegantly done. Look forward to reading the rest :)
| MaxFic chapter 7 . 8/27/2013
It's good, now write more of it.
| Red Leader chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
This is a good read, update more please.
| Amelia chapter 6 . 6/18/2013
The next chapter. Need it.
| crazykrew chapter 6 . 6/15/2013
SO AWESOME!... can't wait for more!...(hint-hint...)
| JEREMY chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
Did you ,by any chance,happen to get a copy of THE FIRST DRAFT SCRIPT OF 'MAN OF STEEL' ?
This story sounds suspiciously like the movie. In which case, I thank you for saving most of us some popcorn and ticket money.
| Superfan2 chapter 5 . 5/4/2013
So Lex is testing Superman a la STM? Only Superman hasn't revealed he is from Krypton. So Lex shouldn't suspect his weakness yet. However, the meteor research project? Is it just a random LexCorp project or is Lexx going to test various alien elements on Superman?
Looking forward to what happens next.
| With The What Now chapter 4 . 4/21/2013
Please update soon,
| Superfan2 chapter 4 . 3/6/2013
Nice take on the rooftop interview. Glad Superman didn't mention not being able to see through lead or the name Krypton. That would be reckless info to let get out. Just look what it lead to in S:TM. Luthor almost killing Superman.
Why can't Superman stay near the LexCorp spire for too long? Sounds like it may affect him? Kryptonite? But Luthor does not know about it yet. It's not clear even Superman does.
| Fondycheesehead chapter 3 . 2/27/2013
Although little note. Amanda/Mandy became Megan part way through the scene. Otherwise great job
| Fondycheesehead chapter 2 . 2/26/2013
Great story! Keep it up!
| Superfan2 chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Interesting story so far.
Like the nod the STM. Good to mix and match things from the various incarnations. Will Lois get a roof-top interview? Will Superman be more cautious in what he tells reporters. Like he can't see through lead and is from Krypton. That bit of info allowed Lex to come w/in minutes of killing Superman in STM. Does Supes know he has vulnerabilities? Kryptonite, solar radiation and maybe others? What did Jor-El tell him about potential dangers to his life.
Looking forward to next update.
Nice to see the Superman section is now just 1 story short of 1000.