Reviews for Crossed Paths Book 3: The Final Battle
AlbedoActual chapter 10 . 7/1
Spartan N238 Purple Heart awarded

Now rated Hyper-Lethal

damn this is good, it's like a halo game, only in book form...
jon3s115 chapter 13 . 2/25/2014
Icekiller... absolutely id love a reading to be done. And thanks for the review, it's always good to hear that someone enjoys what I do. Please PM me
Icekiller72 chapter 7 . 2/24/2014
THANK YOU! so much for explaining that there is nothing going on between krystal and kevin! i saw a felt what you were going for. krystal is a friend that, back when kevin joined the team, and now is being almost like a motherly figure but more on a friend side! anyway im reading everyone of your fics. they are simply amazing and appeal to all the games, character, etc that i love! if you want to chat more plz email me at

i would be interested to talk with you about doing some readings for my youtube channel. all credit going to you of course! :D
GrimlockX4 chapter 11 . 6/3/2013
Things are really heating up in the 3rd installment of this trilogy. :) Keep up the good work.

Wonder if Kevin will stay on Earth or go back to Corneria with the team after this war is over?
Xstar7 chapter 10 . 5/26/2013
Thank god Krystal isnt dead.
Xstar7 chapter 10 . 5/26/2013
The best chapter yet!
bryan mccloud chapter 10 . 5/24/2013
uh oh, a trap set by daniel and victor.

if the rest of the marauders members come, star fox would be outnumber completely.

good chapter man.
GrimlockX4 chapter 10 . 5/24/2013
This chapter and the previous one were pretty action packed and that's what I like seeing in them.

Also like how Kevin got himself new armor and laser pistol cause you gotta have all the new 'toys' when you're on a mercenary team! :)

Good luck on the next chapter.
RyanGuardianRanger chapter 9 . 5/20/2013
I look forward to seeing the next chapter as soon as possible,keep going!
bryan mccloud chapter 9 . 5/20/2013
this looks similar to the black suns story as in the marauders team and wolf being the leader only.

no other elements of the black suns story are in this story..._.
Troygroomes chapter 9 . 5/19/2013
wow ace Combat assault horizion intro as his dream.
bryan mccloud chapter 8 . 5/15/2013
is the enemy going to ambush them at this base? because the enemy wouldn't leave a base empty unless they got a trap waiting for them...lol.

good chapter man.
GrimlockX4 chapter 7 . 5/5/2013
Very excellent chapter, love the action and fighting scenes. Keep up the good work! _
Troygroomes chapter 7 . 5/5/2013
10 out of 10. excellent chapter. but how did the allies jets not run out of fuel? wil Fox ask Krystal to become his wife?.
bryan mccloud chapter 7 . 5/5/2013
i spotted just a few mistakes here and there...lol.

but other than that it is a good chapter.
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