Reviews for The Champ
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15
Great story! Very interesting and intriguing.
NA chapter 1 . 5/30
guest chapter 1 . 4/29
hey try making a chichi and gohan fic also.
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 4/17
Luna Satan chapter 1 . 3/10
Guest chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
The ending was epic
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2014
now this is rape
Sayiangurl132 chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Nice chapter I would have imagined what gohan would do to himself if he found out about it I'd say probably kill himself:(
rebmul8 chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
id like to see what gohan does to him for this
Letuise chapter 1 . 7/6/2013
Nice story can u make a sequel?
Sab chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
Didn't like idea of the story at all, but you did execute it in the most perfect way possible (imho). I'm not really into 'these' things myself, but I can only imagine what someone with interest would think.

Keep on going with the well detailed storytelling, your fics definitely are something, in this case original and well, interesting(?). :)
AlphaShenron chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
Interesting so it was Gohan showing up that prevented Hercule from taking Videl's vaginal virginity. The aphrodesiac must've been potent to have Videl begging like that haha! Good hope to see another
GrimmPanic chapter 1 . 2/26/2013
I just wanna say that I love your work. But I have to wonder did you mean bowels instead of bowls?